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Dance With Me (Free verse) by grumpycrafter

Misconceptions, secret love, choreographed separate lives. Each dancing to synchronal songs. Thoughts exchanged, truths revealed, a new song begins. Slowly sway in his arms to three-quarter time. Feelings voiced, dreams shared, first he leads, then you. Music stops, the dance continues to the rhythm echoes. A waltz of love, another song begins.

Ranger 4-Dec-06/2:19 AM
Nice idea. It wants to be put to a waltz beat though.




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