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Member since 2004 · Posted 19 Apr 2004 · 4 comments

Dirt cleanses hearts untrue. Chiping away from steel/ covers: clean as the streaming wash of dirt collected for years in loveless mesh. Holding one (religeous) problem (whom said to whom one to the other) without all powerful Him; in, all powerful, decision. Striking fists, in which, are wholly God and wholly thought on (as the prayer unsaid) Now no eyes are seeing to the blindness of faith.

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[10] zodiac 19-Apr-04/2:00 PM Reply

Please post the poem that begins "The gothic clocks struck their tolls" next.

[10] zodiac › zodiac 19-Apr-04/2:04 PM Reply

I meant "trolls", "The gothic clocks struck their trolls."

[10] zodiac › zodiac 20-Apr-04/6:12 PM Reply

Dear waxtester, I'm not often serious on this site, but on this matter I'm being completely honest. The troll poem rocks. I really think the people here will like it a lot. Thank you.

[n/a] deleted user 19-Apr-04/2:01 PM Reply

I have no idea what you are talking about. No vote.