| Re: Green by tiamat |
2-Jan-04/5:31 PM |
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This is awsome, i really like it, you don't follow any 'rules' of poetry, which I love, good work
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| Re: Justifications by Evening |
2-Jan-04/5:33 PM |
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This is GREAT! I can totally relate to it, keep up yhe good work
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| Re: somewhere between alpha and omega by crin |
2-Jan-04/5:34 PM |
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It's pretty good, I don't understand it, which is proubly what you're going for, so good job
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| Re: Dispersion by timfowler |
2-Jan-04/5:36 PM |
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I don't really like this one, I dunno why, and I wish I did so maybe it's help you, but I'm not that great, so don't listen to what I think
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| Re: Wondering by anagram |
2-Jan-04/5:38 PM |
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This is pretty good, and I enjoied reading it. I hope you find the answers you are looking for
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| Re: Worshipping the Porclin God by Derge |
2-Jan-04/5:40 PM |
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This was fun to read and I really liked it
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| Re: Whose God? by elizabethann |
2-Jan-04/5:42 PM |
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NICE! I think god sucks ass, so I see me and you are on the same page, please read my poem "where was god" and give me your thoughts
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| Re: O Death by lastobelus |
2-Jan-04/6:45 PM |
remember me, im the dude who wrote 'where was god', well it's my quite firm belife that There is no god to question, he doesn't exist...i bet you would love to know that i work at a Planned Parenthood office, If you liked that one, read this
New commandments
Your extinct god
Will bow down before me and call himself a fraud
And tell your poor abused children that I will end the animosity
I will be the one to set them free
The new ten commandments go as follows
He who prays, also wallows
Tho shalt not commit a crime
To buy your extinct god time
Tho shall destroy all idols
Tho shall burn every bible
Tho shall dine in thy own mercy
As soon as they can kill me
Tho shall sin in my name
And tho shall treat life as a game
Tho shalt not rape thy mother
Tho shalt not love thy brother
For the final preparation
To assure the restoration
Tho shall sing for satan
To give back all you have taken
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| Re: Just-Average-Zongs-Zung by tralala42001 |
4-Jan-04/5:44 PM |
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this poem was so confusing it's great
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| Re: one true love (beta test) by crwncka1 |
4-Jan-04/5:48 PM |
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| Re: Internet Prisoner by avwiz71 |
4-Jan-04/5:49 PM |
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dude, this should be a song, it's real great
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| Re: Searching... by kissmeufool58 |
4-Jan-04/5:50 PM |
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it has a sweet nothing to it that makes it ring
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| Re: Fireplay by drjhoss |
4-Jan-04/5:51 PM |
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I think I know how you feel, love's a bitch
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| Re: The Spark by unknown |
4-Jan-04/5:56 PM |
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kinda confusing, so it's pretty good
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| Re: CAUTION: VAMPIRE ZONE... by TanHand |
4-Jan-04/6:05 PM |
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Holy crap man, thats awesome, never let anyone tell you to change it in any way, cuz it's perfect the way it is
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4-Jan-04/6:06 PM |
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ok, i hate rap, which doesn't mean this is bad, just not my taste
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| Re: Anniversary Poem by Blindpoetry |
4-Jan-04/6:07 PM |
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you should do something for her just cuz you love her so much don't you think?
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| Re: The Service by forestchild7 |
4-Jan-04/6:09 PM |
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it's dark and almost morbid. Pretty good
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