| Re: a comment on Rain by dancin_n_da_moonlite |
15-Jan-05/8:05 PM |
lol
I'm fourteen. Been here, sending crappy poetry as I write them, since 2003. I have way more. But just the sight of them will sting the most unpenetrable eyes.
I've gotten my share of mean people here. eh. It's what Poemranker is made of. *cough*Dark Angle*cough*
I'm not making this into a sorry fest.
But I wasn't trying to be mean. either.
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| Re: a comment on It's A Long Way From Heaven by Blindpoetry |
15-Jan-05/7:45 PM |
I wonder if my last comment influenced you on this descision.
Whatever. Thanks. :)
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| Re: a comment on Rain by dancin_n_da_moonlite |
15-Jan-05/7:44 PM |
btw, I'm not trying to say 'LISTEN TO ME OR YOU'LL BE CRAP FOREVER'
I was just... suggesting. :)
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| Re: a comment on Rain by dancin_n_da_moonlite |
15-Jan-05/7:43 PM |
Look.
Don't get pissed at me or pity ME because your poem is predictable.
I was just sharing the thought so you might can work on it in the future?
It's rare that I actaully try to help here.
Think of it as a compliment that I share my thoughts.
Don't get pissed and say I can't look at anything deeply.
I'm a fucking teenager. I'm supposed to find everything deeply. And sad. And shit.
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| Re: a comment on Rain by dancin_n_da_moonlite |
15-Jan-05/7:36 PM |
then again. Now that I actually thought about it.
This style is sort of bad. I mean. Good for like. two stanza's ...and then use something different from then on, after the two stanza's...
Because you can basically PREDICT what Davey's going to say.
And that's just boring as hell.
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| Re: Rain by dancin_n_da_moonlite |
15-Jan-05/7:34 PM |
I would have really liked this more.
If it had more of a point. Maybe.
And if their is. I don't see it.
But I liked the way you wrote it. And what you used to make it so alternative.
So despite its lack in... reason. and. the why'ness.
Your creative bland Davey and Katie make up for it.
It's just so. Weird.
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| Re: a comment on Fanboy by Blindpoetry |
8-Jan-05/10:23 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Fanboy by Blindpoetry |
7-Jan-05/2:59 PM |
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always traveling is sort of as an adjective.
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| Re: a comment on Betwixt and In Between by dougsoderstrom |
29-Dec-04/12:37 PM |
My Gawd
If your referring to my last post, that is............ that you try to find my sarcasm.
Spence
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| Re: Lovelier Than Love by Bhaskaryya |
28-Dec-04/10:43 PM |
Votes make it more clear and exact, depending on who comments.
I liked this a lot. Didn't spot any errors. (but was i actually looking? nope)
Flowed well.
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| Re: a comment on Road Tripped by Blindpoetry |
28-Dec-04/10:38 PM |
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Do I then deserve a vote?
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| Re: a comment on Road Tripped by Blindpoetry |
28-Dec-04/10:33 PM |
in pimple, I'm sure almost everything bad is allowed. Think of this as a pimple, then.
And i already read it.
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| Re: a comment on Road Tripped by Blindpoetry |
28-Dec-04/10:25 PM |
Small, detailed grammar isn't important to me.
You read it the same.
Who cares.
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| Re: a comment on Writer's Block by Bhaskaryya |
28-Dec-04/10:21 AM |
I was referring to
" (Surely FINGERING wouldn't be too decent lol). "
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| Re: a comment on Betwixt and In Between by dougsoderstrom |
28-Dec-04/10:02 AM |
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I do it so much, i can't control myself and people stare at me for a while.
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| Re: a comment on Writer's Block by Bhaskaryya |
28-Dec-04/9:26 AM |
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Obviously, you haven't read much of the others poetry, then.
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| Re: Writer's Block by Bhaskaryya |
27-Dec-04/9:54 PM |
I've seen this subject written a lot.
Then again. I write alot of angsty, crappy high school poems. I shouldn't be talking.
ur.
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| Re: a comment on Writer's Block by Bhaskaryya |
27-Dec-04/9:49 PM |
That's sort of true.
I remember Ducks With AIDs. ha
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| Re: a comment on Spotty Sun by Blindpoetry |
27-Dec-04/9:29 PM |
Trying not to sound like an overlord or some type of god that knows everything and/or knows how to make weird things - i made it choppy on purpose...becuase. it was fun and i sortof wanted to impact different kinds of subjects in each stanza.
Me explaining each stanza would sort of kill the poem, in my eyes.
blahblahblahblahbalh hope that helps i guess.
once again, blahablhablhablhablah
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| Re: a comment on Inspire Me by Blindpoetry |
3-Nov-04/1:43 PM |
*stares at super glue*
Damn K-4
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