replying on It's A Long Way From Heaven by Blindpoetry
15 Jan 2005, 7:45 PM
I wonder if my last comment influenced you on this descision.
Whatever. Thanks. :)
Whatever. Thanks. :)
replying on Rain by dancin_n_da_moonlite
15 Jan 2005, 7:44 PM
btw, I'm not trying to say 'LISTEN TO ME OR YOU'LL BE CRAP FOREVER'
I was just... suggesting. :)
I was just... suggesting. :)
replying on Rain by dancin_n_da_moonlite
15 Jan 2005, 7:43 PM
Look.
Don't get pissed at me or pity ME because your poem is predictable.
I was just sharing the thought so you might can work on it in the future?
It's rare that I actaully try to help here.
Think of it as a compliment that I share my thoughts.
Don't get pissed and say I can't look at anything deeply.
I'm a fucking teenager. I'm supposed to find everything deeply. And sad. And shit.
Don't get pissed at me or pity ME because your poem is predictable.
I was just sharing the thought so you might can work on it in the future?
It's rare that I actaully try to help here.
Think of it as a compliment that I share my thoughts.
Don't get pissed and say I can't look at anything deeply.
I'm a fucking teenager. I'm supposed to find everything deeply. And sad. And shit.
replying on Rain by dancin_n_da_moonlite
15 Jan 2005, 7:36 PM
then again. Now that I actually thought about it.
This style is sort of bad. I mean. Good for like. two stanza's ...and then use something different from then on, after the two stanza's...
Because you can basically PREDICT what Davey's going to say.
And that's just boring as hell.
This style is sort of bad. I mean. Good for like. two stanza's ...and then use something different from then on, after the two stanza's...
Because you can basically PREDICT what Davey's going to say.
And that's just boring as hell.
on Rain by dancin_n_da_moonlite
15 Jan 2005, 7:34 PM
I would have really liked this more.
If it had more of a point. Maybe.
And if their is. I don't see it.
But I liked the way you wrote it. And what you used to make it so alternative.
So despite its lack in... reason. and. the why'ness.
Your creative bland Davey and Katie make up for it.
It's just so. Weird.
If it had more of a point. Maybe.
And if their is. I don't see it.
But I liked the way you wrote it. And what you used to make it so alternative.
So despite its lack in... reason. and. the why'ness.
Your creative bland Davey and Katie make up for it.
It's just so. Weird.
replying on Fanboy by Blindpoetry
8 Jan 2005, 10:23 AM
thanks :-D
replying on Fanboy by Blindpoetry
7 Jan 2005, 2:59 PM
always traveling is sort of as an adjective.
replying on Betwixt and In Between by dougsoderstrom
29 Dec 2004, 12:37 PM
My Gawd
If your referring to my last post, that is............ that you try to find my sarcasm.
Spence
If your referring to my last post, that is............ that you try to find my sarcasm.
Spence
on Lovelier Than Love by Bhaskaryya
28 Dec 2004, 10:43 PM
Votes make it more clear and exact, depending on who comments.
I liked this a lot. Didn't spot any errors. (but was i actually looking? nope)
Flowed well.
I liked this a lot. Didn't spot any errors. (but was i actually looking? nope)
Flowed well.
replying on Road Tripped by Blindpoetry
28 Dec 2004, 10:38 PM
Do I then deserve a vote?
replying on Road Tripped by Blindpoetry
28 Dec 2004, 10:33 PM
in pimple, I'm sure almost everything bad is allowed. Think of this as a pimple, then.
And i already read it.
And i already read it.
replying on Road Tripped by Blindpoetry
28 Dec 2004, 10:25 PM
Small, detailed grammar isn't important to me.
You read it the same.
Who cares.
You read it the same.
Who cares.
replying on Writer's Block by Bhaskaryya
28 Dec 2004, 10:21 AM
I was referring to
" (Surely FINGERING wouldn't be too decent lol). "
" (Surely FINGERING wouldn't be too decent lol). "
replying on Betwixt and In Between by dougsoderstrom
28 Dec 2004, 10:02 AM
I do it so much, i can't control myself and people stare at me for a while.
replying on Writer's Block by Bhaskaryya
28 Dec 2004, 9:26 AM
Obviously, you haven't read much of the others poetry, then.
on Writer's Block by Bhaskaryya
27 Dec 2004, 9:54 PM
I've seen this subject written a lot.
Then again. I write alot of angsty, crappy high school poems. I shouldn't be talking.
ur.
Then again. I write alot of angsty, crappy high school poems. I shouldn't be talking.
ur.
replying on Writer's Block by Bhaskaryya
27 Dec 2004, 9:49 PM
That's sort of true.
I remember Ducks With AIDs. ha
I remember Ducks With AIDs. ha
replying on Spotty Sun by Blindpoetry
27 Dec 2004, 9:29 PM
Trying not to sound like an overlord or some type of god that knows everything and/or knows how to make weird things - i made it choppy on purpose...becuase. it was fun and i sortof wanted to impact different kinds of subjects in each stanza.
Me explaining each stanza would sort of kill the poem, in my eyes.
blahblahblahblahbalh hope that helps i guess.
once again, blahablhablhablhablah
Me explaining each stanza would sort of kill the poem, in my eyes.
blahblahblahblahbalh hope that helps i guess.
once again, blahablhablhablhablah
replying on Inspire Me by Blindpoetry
3 Nov 2004, 1:43 PM
*stares at super glue*
Damn K-4
Damn K-4
I'm fourteen. Been here, sending crappy poetry as I write them, since 2003. I have way more. But just the sight of them will sting the most unpenetrable eyes.
I've gotten my share of mean people here. eh. It's what Poemranker is made of. *cough*Dark Angle*cough*
I'm not making this into a sorry fest.
But I wasn't trying to be mean. either.