on some deleted poem
19 Dec 2003, 9:06 AM
Beautiful. ;)
on some deleted poem
19 Dec 2003, 9:47 AM
Reminds me of an episode of Futerama... lol. I love it!
on the rose layed on the barren grave by josh_5o
21 Dec 2003, 7:07 PM
I'm seeing alot of 'the's ... Try to lower the number of them and start your lines... uh.. differently.. :-D
on Pawn by Blindpoetry
30 Dec 2003, 8:20 PM
someone gives me a two and doesn't tell me where I went wrong? *sigh* then how can I improve my work!?
on ummm by SILYLILGURL
30 Dec 2003, 9:08 PM
haha! funny, no? I give it an 8, because i just thought that was hilarious!
on some deleted poem
30 Dec 2003, 10:17 PM
Despite what other people think about it, I thought it was filled with much coolness. - but it took me a while to get it, but somehow, I did and I love it! A 9!
on Whose God? by elizabethann
2 Jan 2004, 5:51 PM
I give it a 7... i think it is an ok poem. But the only thing that turns me down is the whole God thing... but thats only me. Still, pretty well written...
on Too obvious by INTRANSIT
3 Jan 2004, 6:30 AM
"After some treatments
you'll look like a sith."
Is that a Star Wars reference? lol Sounds a lot like it... Nice poem.
you'll look like a sith."
Is that a Star Wars reference? lol Sounds a lot like it... Nice poem.
on some deleted poem
3 Jan 2004, 3:25 PM
uh.. unless I'm missing some hidden poetic part... I don't see why you posted this...
on Anniversary Poem by Blindpoetry
3 Jan 2004, 5:10 PM
Written for my ex girlfriend as an anniversary present... and smashing Pumkins is her favorite band...