| regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Dec-03/9:06 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Dec-03/9:47 AM |
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Reminds me of an episode of Futerama... lol. I love it!
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| Re: the rose layed on the barren grave by josh_5o |
21-Dec-03/7:07 PM |
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I'm seeing alot of 'the's ... Try to lower the number of them and start your lines... uh.. differently.. :-D
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| Re: Fire by Pervy Elf |
25-Dec-03/9:59 PM |
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Romantic, no? hm.. though, I can't help but think this was inspired by sex...?
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| Re: Pawn by Blindpoetry |
30-Dec-03/8:20 PM |
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someone gives me a two and doesn't tell me where I went wrong? *sigh* then how can I improve my work!?
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| Re: ummm by SILYLILGURL |
30-Dec-03/9:08 PM |
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haha! funny, no? I give it an 8, because i just thought that was hilarious!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
30-Dec-03/10:17 PM |
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Despite what other people think about it, I thought it was filled with much coolness. - but it took me a while to get it, but somehow, I did and I love it! A 9!
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| Re: Whose God? by elizabethann |
2-Jan-04/5:51 PM |
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I give it a 7... i think it is an ok poem. But the only thing that turns me down is the whole God thing... but thats only me. Still, pretty well written...
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| Re: Too obvious by INTRANSIT |
3-Jan-04/6:30 AM |
"After some treatments
you'll look like a sith."
Is that a Star Wars reference? lol Sounds a lot like it... Nice poem.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
3-Jan-04/3:25 PM |
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uh.. unless I'm missing some hidden poetic part... I don't see why you posted this...
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| Re: Anniversary Poem by Blindpoetry |
3-Jan-04/5:10 PM |
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Written for my ex girlfriend as an anniversary present... and smashing Pumkins is her favorite band...
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