Re: Exist For You by WithoutLife	21-Jun-04/1:17 AM
not my genre exactly, but well done. *8*
Re: "She Phoned This Morning" by ARTIE	21-Jun-04/1:19 AM
Sounds too much like only the decent beginning of a more substantial poem. I appreciate the use of language. *7*
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Jun-04/1:23 AM
You continue to amaze and never cease to impress. Fantastic broken lines. Particularly fond of lines 2 and 3. Outstanding! *10.5*
Re: Deluge by EAger to Offend	21-Jun-04/1:24 AM
Good, if voted *8*
Re: Quiet, Kind Hills by Dovina	21-Jun-04/11:57 AM
Wholesome house-building goodness. *9*
Re: Sonnetias by MacFrantic	21-Jun-04/7:00 PM
As a footnote, the suffix *-ias* means a speech, or figure of speech, designed to move the passion.
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Jun-04/8:17 PM
Not bad, but can't necessarily see it as a lyric. *8*
Re: No choice in the matter by cedand1	21-Jun-04/8:24 PM
Almost had it for a street performer... Statue!? Oh! *heh* *9.166666666666666666666666666666667*
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jun-04/9:25 PM
Winnie the Pooh would be very angry with you... *9*
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jun-04/9:29 PM
Not necessarily my cup of specially brewed herbs and spices, but I especially liked S2 L9 and 10 *7*
Re: The Riddle of Creation by Dovina	22-Jun-04/11:01 PM
Congratulations on know knowing that you have have moved an athiest, with words, however disinterested in the message. *9*
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Jun-04/7:53 PM
Wow! That has got to be... Wow! *4*
Re: Thoughts Asunder by wilco	24-Jun-04/8:00 PM
Satisfying and all that. *10*
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Jun-04/6:33 PM
The effort is there, but for something so moving it lacks...lacks...motion. *7*
Re: Stuffy by horus8	26-Jun-04/6:41 PM
Maybe the feature song of a sitcom-style broadway play written by a gay Edgar Poe...but other than that, quite normal, if not abnormal. Wait! Oh. *8.1*
Re: Poetry. by jonnyduk	30-Jun-04/8:59 PM
If you're going to take that title, at least make an attempt at something worthwile and/or somewhat pleasing to read. *5*
Re: Sugared petrol isn't sweet if your ass is black & blue. by Y2kSlamPoet	8-Jul-04/12:22 PM
This should really be under prose, which I dislike when associated with poetry, but nevertheless... *6*
Re: Ellis Evans: Rhyfel- War by Sasha	10-Jul-04/9:40 PM
Is that the literal translation, or did it just happen to rhyme in English as well? *10*
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Aug-04/12:38 AM
Absolutely oustanding for someone more partial to the absence of rhyme, as it seems. *10* Probably the best limerick on here, save the comma on line two which is just annoying enough.
Re: Wha wha guitar by wnot Dovinaw	3-Aug-04/10:08 PM
If this is poetry...well... then I am unbelievable in the sack...and we all know where...heh, touchè. *7*