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Your anonymous friends should join this site too, I would enjoy reading their poetry also, all 9-11 of them

My sentiments eggzackly cudos magus

I have a welder friend who builds contraptions such as this, I think I wiil share this with him. I am certain he will enjoy it as I did.

I'm not sure if your misspelling is intentional or not, but saddened, beatless,radiance, and of course heart. other than that I like the visual image the poem displays, but the misspelling and punctuation seems to take it away, distracting.

Sounds like a whiskey drinker. sad. I like the haiku tho.

I guess I need to be somewhere else to understand this. As it is it does nothing for me, but I'm too kind to try that 0, therefore 4.

You mean brake, as in to stop? Or break as in to smash, tear into seperate pieces, etc? Dreams are only filtering of your subconscious, you can't always take them seriously.

Yea, it's always colder when you walk away. I'm thinking of building a rotissary in front of my stove so I don't have to keep turning.

Yea, that'll show'er. well spoken, I wish I had read it before the edit, so I'd know how you've spread it

What was this unforgettable gift? If I might be so bold as to ask.

My my, aren't we full of ourselves?

You know man, Salvation isn't easy. I hope you have the strength to hold on, it's a rough ride, and everyone seems to want to pull you off.

Allow yourself to meld with the feelings you have, don't flee from them, They will help you grow.

Well, I wish I had the energy to experience that pain.

Oh yes, I'm sure you'll go far. Don't drop the glasses.

You start off on the wrong foot by saying attatchment is all it can be, is there no room for growth? Still, I like it. Also, I imagine all of you IS everything to the right one.

Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm

So much emotion packed into such a small poem.

I hate to admit I like this, but I do.