Re: Lonely Night by faded	31-Jul-02/9:13 AM
A lifetime on the flipside... I definitely like, Da1
regarding some deleted poem...	31-Jul-02/9:17 AM
I think it just may be. "Things that make you say hmmm..." Da1, holla
Re: red snow by sainthypro	31-Jul-02/9:21 AM
oooohh, deep indeed. Could probably do without the second "dreaming, scheming" in stanza2. or not? Da1 said it.
regarding some deleted poem...	31-Jul-02/9:24 AM
elementary but there's spirit in your form. Da1
regarding some deleted poem...	31-Jul-02/9:33 AM
alrighty then
Re: Angelic Triumvirate by Sterling5583	31-Jul-02/9:40 AM
Very cool
Re: What Does it Mean to be Human by Sterling5583	31-Jul-02/9:47 AM
opinionated but i guess that's "poetry"...Keep it up and as real as possible, Da1
Re: The Wrong Choice by TheVampireLeStan	31-Jul-02/9:58 AM
inspirational and a profound illustration of the true consequence a foolish action... Da1 (my sister tried to commit suicide)
Re: Fragrant Blossom by Jody Conn	31-Jul-02/10:08 AM
this should be printed on condom packages to increase sales, cuz DAMN! It's just lovely enough...Da1 w/ no lubrication --smile--
Re: You Were There by danevie	31-Jul-02/10:10 AM
Next.
Re: scarred by TheVampireLeStan	31-Jul-02/10:13 AM
Gothic confessions, no? you must wear long sleeves
Re: mass transit by silentcat	31-Jul-02/10:14 AM
I feel you in the worst way... well put, Da1
Re: haiku by silentcat	31-Jul-02/10:16 AM
How amusingly tantilizing... Da1 w/ resentful satisfaction
Re: Black Rose by TheVampireLeStan	31-Jul-02/10:23 AM
Just to let you know,I love you... Da1 says let her free and arm yourself with the weapon of indifference.
Re: Tijuana jail song by horus8	31-Jul-02/1:37 PM
crazy-stupid vivid!.. Da1 w/ the speech impediment
Re: What R U? by kawakurdi	31-Jul-02/1:52 PM
A very mystic and marvelous poem w/ lovely reading flow. I've actually posted a poem with the same exact title, but mine is more of a personal question posed to the reader... Da1
Re: Invisible too by horus8	31-Jul-02/2:03 PM
This one's beuatiful. But is it you the timid admirer or her(a ghost against the headstone) who is invisible. Judging from your poetry its probably both... Da1, holla back
Re: Invisible too by horus8	31-Jul-02/2:04 PM
oh and i especially like the use of "left/right"... Very saucy.
Re: The Snowglobe by josh_5o	31-Jul-02/2:08 PM
Newness.
Re: Invisible too by horus8	31-Jul-02/2:19 PM
Horus8 r u talking 2 me?