Re: Everyday Implied But Never Declared by NewbieMe	22-Feb-03/12:40 PM
Congradulations! See, that wasn't so tough.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Feb-03/10:36 PM
Wow, now that's what pornography is missing on all kinds of levels. There area a few glitches here and there, but without those i don't believe this would be as good. Even god is flawed, by being at all. Here's A SWAGGER AWARDE. best poem i think i've read this week, easily.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Feb-03/10:37 PM
But could you call it. Michael Caine finger banged me at the matinee?
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Feb-03/10:33 AM
Yeah, junior colleges have eltistist propaganda programs too. Ceramics for the handicapped. (little johnny was blind, he thought he was making a fruit bowl, but it ended up being a rainbow glazed port a potty.) Now he has a patent and government contracts. They will be available and target this year and swap meets in about a decade.
Re: The Fate of the Gilt by OneFingerAnswer	26-Feb-03/1:22 PM
Stylus.
Re: Ode to Chicken Kiev by bunniesnangels	26-Feb-03/1:25 PM
Quite humorus.
Re: Guilt by Freethinker1602	26-Feb-03/1:32 PM
The title? "How to say absolutely nothing in 36 seconds."
Re: Escape is an Unaffordable luxury by Freethinker1602	26-Feb-03/1:36 PM
By the way in that last poem you began a sentence with "There fore" it's Therefore,. This one you should call "Great White fuckin' sucks""
Re: No future by Freethinker1602	26-Feb-03/1:42 PM
This one is called "Senior tongue lender". Or, " Fuck you Turkey, read the poeme" Or, "A poem you can pop".
Re: No future by Freethinker1602	26-Feb-03/1:44 PM
This is a bit more arc'd and much better then the other two, actually. that 's why i gave it a six.
Re: Fugly by Freethinker1602	26-Feb-03/1:50 PM
"I advise you take head in what I say, prepare". Okay, i'll take head? And an arm too? The word you were looking for is 'heed' As in heed your face it's not yours vulvanator. Regardless of the fact that your 'subject and theme' is a bigwheel in the shadow of a harley (in theme terms). i felt your pain. here's a six.
Re: Fugly by Freethinker1602	26-Feb-03/1:52 PM
You know what's funny? Apparently i said the same thing over a month ago. Why would you not fix that? It makes you look terribly retarded.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Feb-03/2:08 PM
BECAUSE YOU ARE A FREAK MR. CHOADKE. HOW ABOUT SPACE MOUNTAIN INSTEAD.0.Y
Re: 9/11/01 by Jarah	27-Feb-03/2:55 PM
Wow, you would know. 9/11/01? what will we do if the next attack comes on a date not so symbolically pleasing like say 7/11/03 Will you call that "fucking big gulp and two lotto ticket day with a pack of menthols please, Hadid?" Do us a favor, move to Iraq and hold the bullseye.
Re: On coming across a field of deer one afternoon by <~>	27-Feb-03/3:58 PM
Horns a velvet.
Re: On coming across a field of deer one afternoon by <~>	27-Feb-03/4:15 PM
I recieved the magazine today. It looks delightful. Thank you so much for everything. You are a true friend Z. and a great writer. I will give you my feedback perhaps later on the phone. Cute pictures. Very interesting blood line. Cheers.
Re: His Dying Words (2nd draft) by Ranger	27-Feb-03/4:25 PM
"four calm winds" this part does not fit in the hospital. Try changing it to "clean white sheets".
Re: The Feild In Which I Live by Fear of Garbage	27-Feb-03/4:53 PM
Perhaps you swing pipe. though small and just an elbow joint with a little sodder and brazing... who knows, free plumbing. Your spelling of field is really worth the read though, i would imagine, right?
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Feb-03/3:40 PM
And we hope you eventually read Voltaires "Candid", and it makes you rape your own ass with a polo mallet and pam spray on cooking grease at 375 degrees until crispy on the outside and off pink on the inside. Perhaps you should take your mouth off of your mutha's udder for a sec and squirt your name in the grass? Just don't carve in the tree bark, please. Trees have feelings asshole.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Feb-03/4:00 PM
Then he ate her, and livingston's seagull went splash at mach ten.