Re: Metrosexuality by LuckyJoe	19-Aug-03/10:42 PM
You are clearly not Gay, and are Lesbian oldlady tv land on Bravo. I can only give you a 6, and a pat on the Adam's strapple.
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Aug-03/2:52 PM
I've done that lean.
Re: Happy 29. a little late by A. Nomaly	2-Sep-03/2:21 PM
Very good.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Sep-03/2:41 PM
It starts out well, but then tosses it. There are some interesting images here though, and some moments. The title however, is ridiculous. Why give the mystery of it all away? The title should set it up more symbolically cryptic and refined. For instance, call it "One sore nipple too many".
Re: justly now included by A. Nomaly	2-Sep-03/3:02 PM
For sure.
Re: hip hap pap by Garrett S Sexton	2-Sep-03/3:09 PM
Dip Dap pap smear (Free cued tipper) by What happened to my Jello? Guy's a gag, an American gag a great gag, a gay gag a great, big, American, jay bird I've got my fly on Guy Why's my fly on Guy? Well, Guy, that great, American jay that greased, bag, jay bird He has no teetheseses. thereforing, he stealith my jello still warm.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Sep-03/3:17 PM
Jesus, had kinky hair that spoke in tongues and whistles. But why is this an other? Let me guess? Because it's that different! Does your communications major come with a pack of world saving bubble gum? If it does, blow that up. I have a feeling your poetry is good enough to SAVE THE WORLD. YOU WILL BE THE VOICE OF THE MUTED THE EARS OF THE LEPERS THE MISSING DIGITS OF THE DEAF! THE CORN IN THE COB OF SWEET HOLY MARTYRDOM. YES YES!. It's just a shame this crock pot of crock was unreadable, and beyond poor tasting pretentious noodle stroodle.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Sep-03/4:24 PM
I love how you capitalise your "You's" wow, that's so avante garde. yr such a fucking heavy risk taker. I bet you even have unprotected barnyard sex with wild animals. I mean 'W'ild animals. Jesus help us all. Your poetry is so gosh darn Risky. Hack.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Sep-03/10:25 PM
will you be my gaurdian? You can touch my gourd.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Sep-03/11:51 PM
true as it gets= ================ ================= ================== ==========================================BR_N_ON
Re: When He's In Me by J.B. Manning	3-Sep-03/2:01 AM
Normally, homosexual poetry doesn't do me right, but I read this poem while listening to Ginsberg sing C'mon jack, and let me tell you? I laughed more than once. here's an eight.
Re: canto di desiderio by Bill Z Bub	9-Sep-03/10:52 AM
Well, you know I gotta give this a ten, not because I'm Columbian, but because I'm a werewolf'e.
Re: (limits of ambition) by richa	9-Sep-03/10:55 AM
Last line could be "Should this go further." Otherwise, I'll have you know. I think it's very good. As always.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Sep-03/10:58 AM
Are you ready for our initial push? Tonight after dinner I'll write it. This poem is brilliant by the way. 10.
Re: I Usually Wear Pants by razorgrin	9-Sep-03/11:51 AM
Oh boy! umm I'll take that and a sanewitch, pliz.
Re: museheart is internationally published by scitz	9-Sep-03/12:25 PM
I wonder who she was going to recommend the already 'best poetry site' on the internet too? Perhaps her parrot? I tell you she must be a museheart because she sure isn't a museface. lol
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Sep-03/3:24 PM
A touch too thick, but then again this sort of poetry as always been a bit too bland in my book, but thank god I still can find uses for it outside of just writing, so here's a 7.
Re: Constant Penetration by William Delacroix	16-Sep-03/5:45 PM
Yes, so tired and bent they'd bend.
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Sep-03/5:53 PM
You are awfully amusing. Read more about the techtonic plates and less about washing dinner plates, because you're being psychologically 101 simplistic and way off. Your rhymes were like leaves through the eaves of summer's sleeves but cleave age plastic surgeon weave ills are forever and hereditary. Join the pagan prince. Or i'll thorn apple the baby fat my groin and wisk you away any way.
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Sep-03/6:24 PM
What no chorus? Have you seen my bridges? they are well lit and engineered.