Re: dinner salon by baphomet	13-Sep-03/1:49 PM
Oh my Lord, what have I given birth to!! Not close to Dreamer quality! -2-
Re: My Friend Burgers by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	22-Sep-03/4:27 PM
Cute but pointless. I must admit..I did laugh at the 3rd verse. Yes Mysterious one.....me again! Happy to see me?
Re: Brighton Beach by Caducus	24-Sep-03/10:27 AM
Sounds a lot like Brighton Beach in my home town of Brooklyn New York. Along with its neighbor, Coney Island, Brighton Beach has become a safe haven for gangs and Russian mobsters. Sad. -8-
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Sep-03/3:02 AM
JB, Great message. You made it simple because your message is simple....but truthful....and powerful. I nodded with approval throughout my reading of this piece. -9-
Re: >~{In the Shadow of a Crooked Ceiling}~< by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	26-Sep-03/3:10 PM
Let me guess...you're a network specialist currently laying fiber in the New York City Subway system?
Re: Ctrl freak (Alt+ version) by <~>	26-Sep-03/3:17 PM
Proof that too much time on the internet distorts ones sense of reality. I'm really happy the ending did occur in the midst of a sexual climax... yours or your 2 dimensional friend...screen cleaner was just not meant to handle such a job. Go to a bar or club tonight. I'm sure you'll do better.....at least I hope so.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Sep-03/6:28 AM
I know exactly what you're talking about. In 1978 me a my friend broke into the house of a neighborhood dealer and ripped off his stash. I think we were high for two straight weeks on "Finger Hash", which contained beads of opium. Best fucking high I ever had...and believe me...I've had some (though not for last 25 yrs.). We were going to sell some of the shit...but after the first bong hit...decided to keep it for ourselves. For that 2 week period...that hash was definetely my God!
Re: Break Me by Freethinker1602	28-Sep-03/2:33 PM
You will not receive salvation/redemption by being "broken" or taken to task by your earthly or heavinly Father. Self reflection and discipline will get you where you want to go...Then, if you are worthy,.. your "Father" will be willing to converse with you. Stop being a jelly fish! You need a spine to stand up on your own two feet!
Re: EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	29-Sep-03/3:41 PM
Dave, This is truely......well...a mystery! But you did expend effort to type all the letters..so please accept a heartfelt 1.
Re: Trapped in a horseshoe by INTRANSIT	29-Sep-03/3:48 PM
Is this about a bar-maid you've encountered while "INTRANSIT"? I like -8-
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Sep-03/3:03 PM
I'll give you a seven. It would be a straight 10 if it were a bit more vague, obscure, and imperceptible.
Re: the meeting by richa	30-Sep-03/3:20 PM
Rich, I trust it's me...but I gotta tell ya...ya lost me after the first line. Deep or far out...I'm not sure which one is applicable here.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Sep-03/6:18 PM
You are obviously on a higher plane of consciousness than I..cause I just don't get it. Ah I get it now; you have transcribed a message appearing on the Yarmeka of a young Hebrew lad. I think you made a type-o though. It should read Bernie not Beanie. Understandiible error on your part. I knew I'd get it sooner or later. No, I am not pretentious...I'm just being a fucking wise guy..don't take it personally...I'm just fucking with you....but really, I have no idea what you mean...It could be brilliant for all I know.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Oct-03/4:18 AM
No Tom, here's a quicker way: G R A C E Now Tommy baby let me tell ya someting about picking up chicks...cause you got the wrong approach....you've got it all backwards. Feable mind-games don't work (that's how chicks pick us up).. charm does. Let Crystal know how much you enjoy her writing..how it obviously reflects the passion of a woman of deep thoughts and firey emotions. Admit to her that you've visited her web site and find her extremely attractive. Beauty and intelligence is truely are rare combination. Finally, tell her you'd like to get to know her better. Ask her if she'd like to take in a Broadway show...perhaps some wine and cheese (no pun intended) afterwards. Tom, are you getting any of this? Hope this helps. Joe-joe
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Oct-03/5:05 PM
Now your talkin Tommy kid! By the way, Tom I was not berating you...just giving you a little advice.... you've obviously taken it..whether your realize it or not. Drunkin liar maybe....retard..I don't think so. Go get em kiddo.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Oct-03/5:17 PM
Yo Darky, Weh you been? I was waitin down on 125 for you the other night. You get my message? Don't be playin me like that homey! I told the other homeboys you'd be uptown. Laquisha was there with yo son Issac. Yo Darky, the bitch was pissed when she herd you hooked up with Tiwana and Tonya the other night. Dem Hoe's let the shit out the bag. You be a dead man if they get they ass on you. Yo, word goin round town that me and you hookin up to pull some shit off. Homeboys up here don't want any part of our shit....hell two the badddest mother-fuckers on the planet hangin..raisin hell. Those fucking gooks on Martin Luther King Blvd. boarden up they windows and shit...Yo man we like batman and robin....we gonna bang some hoe's smoke some crack or what? Don't bitch out on me this time chump!!! Meet me in front of the Appolo at 8 sharp....Don't play me now!
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Oct-03/5:30 PM
I am thoroughly convinced that you do not exist in human form..that you are a computer program running in background on this site...Nevertheless, I expect to see your tired old ass at the Apollo later on tonight.
Re: Fuck your fucking face monkey fucker by Bachus	2-Oct-03/3:09 PM
Talent without purpose or focus is such a sad thing to witness.
Re: Fuck your fucking face monkey fucker by Bachus	3-Oct-03/4:26 AM
Horus, I meant not offense. I think sometimes we just throw stuff "out there" without much thought. Maybe ist's a product of boredom or a need for attention...I know how good your work can be and just don't feel this piece is representative of your talents. And Horus, we all have our talents...no need for self-indulging proclaimations here...
Re: Trapped Rat by SupremeDreamer	3-Oct-03/11:15 AM
This is very good. Interesting how this piece might be interpreted. Some might say that the poor chap in question is a fool who cannot accept reality and spends his life running in place (and into walls!!!) On the other had, and this is how I see it, the chap here is a visionary who is not afraid to think out of the box. He does not shrug his shoulders and say "that's just the way it is, you can't do anything aobut it" Now, for sure this person is going to get more than his share of lumps in his life. He will need to be strong because he will oftenb fail and will often be the subject of ridicule and criticism. But here's the catch..every person whose ever accomplished anything truely great in their lives has approcahed the world in this manner. Perhaps I've taken this piece way beyond it's intended destination....that's just the way it touched me. Really enjoyed it! -10-