Re: a comment on 1967 Ford Carmine Jalopy by SupremeDreamer	10-Aug-03/3:05 AM
Just keep in mind that i do have three nicks.. (just want to get that out of the way so theres no confusion, course i can always switch and let me "alter ego" confirm it..) less scary? fear isnt an emotion i bother with, so it dont make a difference. ;P btw, whats your take on Pina Colada Belle?
Re: a comment on Musings: Willow Sculpture by SupremeDreamer	10-Aug-03/2:57 AM
Stooped: 1: Bend one's back forward from the waist on down 2: Debase oneself morally, act in an undignified, unworthy, or dishonorable way <- this really gives a nice touch.. :) 5: Carry oneself, often habitually, with head, shoulders, and upper back bent forward. 3/4 was about sagging and descending quickly.. I think stooped worked well, in all respects, course i wouldnt mind a thought from you concerning what you would have chosen. ah, leaves, well.. fuck, i could say foliage! inspiration. thanks for pointing that one out, i made a revision to my computer copy. I could also change the first leave into left. a minor bump. and, i dont think any poem stands unmoved..either the poet moves it or- remembering my boring earth science classes, water makes stone turn into sand, its just a matter of time (depending on your opinion concering time anyway.) Dont worry about being wrong or whatever, i dont mind nitpicks at my stuff, i goto places other than here ya know, and i get people rewriting it in wierd ways saying "This will work better, and blah blah..." but its not that bad, it actually helps, depending on the critic. anyway, enjoy the drunken poetry, im also intoxicated: meth/pina colada's ;)
Re: a comment on 1967 Ford Carmine Jalopy by SupremeDreamer	10-Aug-03/2:40 AM
Yeah, sure you can call me supreme.. horus once called me supremely head in the clouds once that i recall.. heh.. course, my actual name is Lee. ;) My funny friend, i dont string shit together unless its going to make some amount of sense.. take out a dictionary and tell me what phrases i made that didnt make a damn wittle of sense oki? Dont worry about me needing to do this, I DID do just that before picking the words. And even before playing with the wordy cafe universe, i did two drafts and worked the damned thing out. course, im human, so take a crack at it and lets see if i did the dictionary magic correctly. also, i dont actually live in LA.. im in san jose, this is an almost pure creation of me imagination space adventure... i drive a nice pair of muscled legs and rough soled feet.. heh. And, yeah it can decrease ones effectiveness, but it all depends on HOW you do it.. and dude, talkin about comin around to burn my nonexistent car is a bit scary.. i mean, i am called "supremeDreamer" lol. and bout the enviroment, cmon man.. bush is in office, save it. ;P
Re: Sex on bugs by LuckyJoe	3-Aug-03/9:00 PM
holy fuck.. LEAVE POEM RANKER.. this is the worste pile of shit ive ever seen. fucking christ.. torture!!! stop it before i fucking chop you into a caesar salad. 0
Re: a comment on American Eden by Don-Quixote	3-Aug-03/8:14 PM
then again.. i got nothing better to do.. how would you like me to help? i made the plums, but we got to make him eat them..
Re: a comment on American Eden by Don-Quixote	3-Aug-03/8:11 PM
just do the reptilian evolution with him.. id say brutal punishment of that sort would work..
Re: a comment on American Eden by Don-Quixote	3-Aug-03/8:05 PM
help him? jesus man, dont give me that child, thats a thick rock to crack.. btw, about the tortured, i also spoke of the BRAVE.. are the brave suddenly unable to be the tortured? is it impossible for them to be orphans? do you realize now why i said i wanted heavy crit? lol. I think you should bury the hatchet.. i dont think thom is going to wake up and see your an angel and not the devil..
Re: A Reporters Saturday Headline Review by Don-Quixote	3-Aug-03/5:44 AM
raising the bar.. one, two, one, two, muscle bound sailor flexin them muscles... yeah.. why the fuck do i get better when people smack me.. must be some unknown disease that i suffer..
Re: Colgate & Paper towels by Bachus	26-Jul-03/3:15 PM
wtf... lol! blessed with 8.
Re: a comment on Poemranker's Recent Infestation of Teenage Girls by 68.75.19.117	26-Jul-03/3:10 PM
i want to be behind bars.. put my other name supremedreamer in there too!!
Re: a comment on ~~~ My Lament For Museheart ~~~ by JoyLuck	24-Jul-03/3:23 PM
bah eat shit, this thing kicks ass.. poem or not. blessed with 7
Re: Upon a falling bar stool (Free for all) by PluckyHoe by horus8	24-Jul-03/2:47 PM
hahahahahahaha. ah horus, man, you never fail do you? this is fucking good.. but do you have to make me feel small? ;P goddamn. blessed with 10.
Re: a comment on Ranting Drunkard by Don-Quixote	24-Jul-03/2:44 PM
I prefer pure wormwood extracts... ;)
Re: a comment on Christs Harlot by Don-Quixote	24-Jul-03/2:42 PM
thanks for spelling correction.. ;/ how did i fuckin misspell that.. no more weed for me..