Re: a comment on why? by nentwined	25-Feb-06/10:24 PM
Ouch.
Re: a comment on why? by nentwined	25-Feb-06/10:24 PM
only what you make, perhaps.
Re: a comment on why? by nentwined	25-Feb-06/10:24 PM
There's something in that.
Re: a comment on why? by nentwined	25-Feb-06/10:23 PM
Agreed. :)
Re: a comment on First Unborn Sun by Been Here Before	23-Feb-06/11:58 AM
Actually, everything should just work now. You may need to log out and log back in. If you can't log out, try clearing your poemranker cookie.
Re: a comment on First Unborn Sun by Been Here Before	23-Feb-06/11:45 AM
The issues that were printed are still being sold, I believe -- http://nfg.ca/ -- but they're not doing any more. I had a parting of ways with them. On the other hand, I've got a new magazine that's going to open to submissions come July. Account info to come via email.
Re: a comment on First Unborn Sun by Been Here Before	22-Feb-06/12:25 AM
PS, Vilanelle does seem to make for a good chant. (and your quickfinger account doesn't seem to exist anymore--I'm getting bounces from it)
Re: a comment on First Unborn Sun by Been Here Before	22-Feb-06/12:24 AM
Would you like me to merge the two accounts? Gods, I hate Myspace. The ads and slow pageloads and interface drive me batty. But I'm not as social as all that, or something. And I am a livejournal addict, give or take. And yet--somehow, I post on Myspace every now and then. I don't know why. I should just give it up. Spoken word I tried once. I didn't really like the atmosphere, but I expect it would be nice with people you knew. Some of the stuff was impressive, but too much of it wasn't. A lot like poemranker in that regard, perhaps. ;)
Re: First Unborn Sun by Been Here Before	21-Feb-06/2:28 PM
Dude. You're alive! I've been wondering what became of you. :) I'm glad you found your way back here. Now why is your email bouncing? I think you picked a beautiful subject for the form--it really pounds it in. The flow is more awkward than I think it needs to be, and yeah--the spelling issues as noted.
Re: a comment on Recognition by nentwined	16-Feb-06/10:49 AM
Done, though I think chances of anyone actually following the difference here are slim to none. :) Maybe I will try, though. It's been a long time since I wrote.
Re: a comment on Recognition by nentwined	15-Feb-06/9:39 AM
I'm down with that. Give me a couple of links for examples and definitions, and I'll make it happen.
Re: a comment on Hoi Polloi by INTRANSIT	14-Jan-06/5:44 PM
sorry, color me oblivious, still. :/ The only connotation to huffing I've got is inhalants. And/or, breathing in the cold. And/or the big bad wolf...
Re: a comment on Hoi Polloi by INTRANSIT	27-Dec-05/9:31 AM
Just a little, but I wasn't doing well at all. Just looked up 'hoi polloi' (greek, huh?) Still not sure what 'bearing time' is. I can tell that the word-play is cute, but the meaning is lost on me.
Re: Train of Thought by Sisterwolf	26-Dec-05/6:13 PM
This has ome nice images, and a decent sentiment, but some of it is just too hackneyed. Punctuation would definitely help the reader follow what is written, but I don't know if that would really help the poem.
Re: a comment on Broken Bird by Sisterwolf	26-Dec-05/6:09 PM
If you really want more detail, a) read the definition of a pimple poem; b) the rhyme scheme is hackneyed, nearly impossible to do well; c) the rhythm is off just about everywhere; d) your english is broken ("he taught she is ugly"?) e) you twist the word order to fit the rhymes you want Most of us have written stuff this bad. It's okay. You cannot improve this poem. Put it behind you and move on.
Re: Broken Bird by Sisterwolf	26-Dec-05/5:52 PM
good pustule of a pimple.
Re: Paradise by TLRufener	26-Dec-05/5:51 PM
boring.
Re: Apocalypse has come to end by Prince of Void	26-Dec-05/5:50 PM
Makes me think of Bush.
Re: real fright of going home by veggiegurl	26-Dec-05/5:48 PM
wow.
Re: Hoi Polloi by INTRANSIT	26-Dec-05/5:45 PM
huh? :)