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real fright of going home (Free verse) by veggiegurl
going home soon
scared of whats ahead
looking up at the moon
scary thoughts running through my head
I missed my mother
even more I missed my brother
to live with strangers
is a feeling like no other
it's been 4 years
now i'm eighteen
I had to deal w/ all the snickers and snears
I geuss it's good to go home and have somewhere 2 lean
going home soon
scared of whats ahead
looking up at the moon
I hope you liked what youv'e read
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.7310586
Overall Rank: 11845
Posted: December 24, 2005 4:45 PM PST; Last modified: December 24, 2005 4:45 PM PST
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