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come with me (Acrostic) by darylchew
Come, come with me Over the mountains, we can go anywhere Marching across the country, no one can stop us East, towards utopia, where we can be alone Wind, gently wheezing Infusing a lulling melody Taciturn, enigmatic silence Hallowed land My dear, if you could only see what i see Euphoria, if you come with me.

Up the ladder: Rush
Down the ladder: Adorasi

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.7310586
Overall Rank: 11843
Posted: August 28, 2004 1:52 AM PDT; Last modified: August 28, 2004 1:52 AM PDT
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[7] TAMARAG67 @ 64.12.116.70 | 29-Aug-04/7:15 PM | Reply
When can we leave? I'm packing a bag-
[8] BigB @ 202.156.2.50 | 30-Aug-04/6:43 AM | Reply
utopia! i feel the euphoria!
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