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Acrostic № 111158

come with me

Member since 2004 · Posted 28 Aug 2004 · 2 comments

Come, come with me Over the mountains, we can go anywhere Marching across the country, no one can stop us East, towards utopia, where we can be alone Wind, gently wheezing Infusing a lulling melody Taciturn, enigmatic silence Hallowed land My dear, if you could only see what i see Euphoria, if you come with me.

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[7] TAMARAG67 29-Aug-04/7:15 PM Reply
When can we leave? I'm packing a bag-
[8] BigB 30-Aug-04/6:43 AM Reply
utopia! i feel the euphoria!