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Apocalypse has come to end (Free verse) by Prince of Void I passed far away
Since Darknessâs continued to linger on
By reckless despairs in a shape of heavens
Rising above my head
Filling my air with its vain sense
Upon my fading shadows
Below land of voids
Itâs still growing intensively
Thorough grieves of mourning glimmers
To the lake of tears reflect ocean of chaos
In thousand corners of my anxious eyes
Miles... Miles away...
Screams of mans in end of their times
Hours of horror have possessed their worlds
Apocalypse has come to end
The dawn of desperations
Dusk of man has silenced many places
Deserted many places
Forgotten in many big bangs
Up the ladder:
monday v2
Down the ladder:
Rainbow
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Posted: December 24, 2005 11:48 AM PST; Last modified: December 24, 2005 11:48 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.880797 Overall Rank: 10067 Comments:
A pretty dismal place, this void of yours.
I'm gratefull to your comment ..highness ..u're the princess of post-modern poerty.. i wish i was more capable like u .....
The words "highness" and "princess" make me more nervous even than "post modern poetry." Surely you jest on all three counts.
dovina why so much self doubt.
insecure are u..............
I have self-doubt. I am not a princess and should not be called "highness." But thank you. Post modern poetry? - I never thought of mine as that.
"Screams of mans in end of their times" says it all.
Makes me think of Bush.
it has gone far ..it makes u think of many things like globalisation , post-colonialsim,Millennium concepts
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we are all faithful to poerty with our own fashions
if u have ever understand my poems, I'm a god ..