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Apocalypse has come to end

Member since 2002 · Posted 24 Dec 2005 · 12 comments

I passed far away Since Darknessâs continued to linger on By reckless despairs in a shape of heavens Rising above my head Filling my air with its vain sense Upon my fading shadows Below land of voids Itâs still growing intensively Thorough grieves of mourning glimmers To the lake of tears reflect ocean of chaos In thousand corners of my anxious eyes Miles... Miles away... Screams of mans in end of their times Hours of horror have possessed their worlds Apocalypse has come to end The dawn of desperations Dusk of man has silenced many places Deserted many places Forgotten in many big bangs

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[7] zodiac 24-Dec-05/12:43 PM Reply

I started reading this poem "Void has come to void" and replacing all nouns, verbs and adjectives with "void", and found that it was identical to all your other poems. If you have ever read a poem, I'm a cod.

[n/a] Prince of Void › zodiac 26-Dec-05/12:02 AM Reply

some of us're influenced by poerty itself ..but some other arts can infulence a poet to find his own vision within his own path ..
we are all faithful to poerty with our own fashions
if u have ever understand my poems, I'm a god ..

[7] zodiac › Prince of Void 26-Dec-05/7:54 AM Reply

I'm influenced by television. But I wouldn't call myself Tom Brokaw. Be a god, if you like. I'm sure gods don't have to correctly spell poetry, or conjugate "have ever understood". Or know how to make a correctly-functioning planet, for that matter. Have a nice eternity.

[n/a] Prince of Void › zodiac 26-Dec-05/10:30 AM Reply

thank u ..that was really a good comment ..by the way I'm a director ..even tv has influenced many arts like video clips and new arts ..and i shound unlearn to understand it better ..

[6] Dovina 24-Dec-05/2:13 PM Reply

A pretty dismal place, this void of yours.

[n/a] Prince of Void › Dovina 26-Dec-05/12:07 AM Reply

I'm gratefull to your comment ..highness ..u're the princess of post-modern poerty.. i wish i was more capable like u .....

[6] Dovina › Prince of Void 26-Dec-05/1:33 PM Reply

The words "highness" and "princess" make me more nervous even than "post modern poetry." Surely you jest on all three counts.

[n/a] crazyknight › Dovina 26-Dec-05/8:46 PM Reply

dovina why so much self doubt.
insecure are u..............

[6] Dovina › crazyknight 27-Dec-05/11:57 AM Reply

I have self-doubt. I am not a princess and should not be called "highness." But thank you. Post modern poetry? - I never thought of mine as that.

[5] Dan garcia-Black 25-Dec-05/1:39 PM Reply

"Screams of mans in end of their times" says it all.

[2] nentwined 26-Dec-05/5:50 PM Reply

Makes me think of Bush.

[n/a] Prince of Void › nentwined 27-Dec-05/11:50 AM Reply

it has gone far ..it makes u think of many things like globalisation , post-colonialsim,Millennium concepts