| Re: Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8 |
22-Jul-03/11:49 PM |
ah...fucking zero giving haters dolling out 0s out of spite
my own 'poem' was hit up with blue zeros
oh well
i dont' care
it wasn't even a poem
it was a house
:(
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| Re: knott's berry farm, jam & polaroids by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
23-Jul-03/8:36 PM |
i used to love that park
and it's jam
but they tricked me with the fake gold they make you pan out of a disgusting trough
:(
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
24-Jul-03/1:37 AM |
i agree with stephen
too many hippie poems
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| Re: Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8 |
24-Jul-03/1:42 AM |
ahh this poem has finally made it to the heap of trash known as the BEST
lets see how quickly the blue zeros shall knock you off again
sad
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| Re: There's no point by LosT SykoPath |
24-Jul-03/10:44 PM |
"You're born"
"You're hear torn"
ahh the life sucks poem
take some tylenol
chase it with a shot of cuervo
and hit the sack
it'll be all better tommorow
Dr. Lilian Thurman: The search for God is absurd?
Donnie: It is if everyone dies alone.
(donnie darko)
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| Re: There's no point by LosT SykoPath |
24-Jul-03/10:47 PM |
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Donnie: I promise one day everything will be better for you.
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| Re: The Missing Love by loveisendless |
29-Jul-03/9:59 PM |
WOW! THIS POEM TOUCHED ME IN THE MOSTEST DEEPEST PLACES!
HERE"S A 10!!!!!!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
30-Jul-03/10:44 PM |
lol
"PoemShootDown"
not that catchy
you know what you can't expect fuckers to be nice all the time. accept the fucking ridicule it will fade over time. every newbie goes thru this little phase of being picked out. GET OVER IT!
and why do you care about what jobless fuckers who check the comments list every 5 seconds of therif life think about your peoms!!!!!! write for yourself. even if i think your peotry sucks, but you keep writing i will respect you. and i'm sure others will too.
oh yeah btw
go fuck yourself too
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| Re: And so the spider spun by horus8 |
30-Jul-03/10:58 PM |
NICE
Can you look for the drained corpse of that lil bee, museheart, in that web of yours? I cannot find her anywhere.
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31-Jul-03/12:42 AM |
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| Re: My Last Plea by Inconceivable_Dreams |
31-Jul-03/1:09 AM |
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all the rhyming takes away from your poem
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1-Aug-03/9:53 AM |
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1-Aug-03/9:55 AM |
lol
but how is the walrus gay?
you should have him stradling a rainbow with his back flippers.
or suckign off another walrus' tusks
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| Re: Moosefart's Revenge by wwFrasier Allonbyww |
4-Aug-03/1:27 PM |
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| Re: Moosefart's Revenge by wwFrasier Allonbyww |
4-Aug-03/1:28 PM |
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btw, she's a fucking ugly cunt
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| Re: Moosefart's Revenge by wwFrasier Allonbyww |
4-Aug-03/1:29 PM |
i dont' have 8 names....
i thougth she liked my rewrite :(
i'm going to cry
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| Re: A parking lot, a smoke, and the pleasure of being alone by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
5-Aug-03/1:39 PM |
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no eyebrows and a cameltoe sounds more interesting and diverse...haha...i just don't like how 13 sounds.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-Aug-03/10:58 PM |
hmm....
nice imagery
i can't wait for more
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| Re: Speaking my mind. Brilliant Idea! by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
12-Aug-03/11:33 PM |
oh wow the first part
blew me away
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
24-Aug-03/10:15 PM |
i love you
remember me? durt
well i'm back
and i still love you
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