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7-Jun-03/5:41 PM |
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Good expression of feelings with a good flow of words. The poem says what's on the author's mind and gives the reader a clear cut view of what the author is feeling. Good for me!
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7-Jun-03/5:46 PM |
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I'm a little confused about the wording, but the overall theme and flow of the selection worked for me.
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9-Jun-03/6:20 PM |
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Once again, a poem who's words are ones that can be shared and related to by others reading it, giving the poem meaning to the reader. Very, very good...
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| Re: Luekemia Tacosalad by Shardik |
9-Jun-03/6:25 PM |
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I don't really understand how the graphics coincide with the overall meaning of the poem, and I think that the language used in the poem takes away from the overal meaning of the poem, but overall good.
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| Re: To those who'd share their heartfelt feelings with the world by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
9-Jun-03/6:54 PM |
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short, sweet, to the point. Great!
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| Re: American Idol epiphany in haiku by Shardik |
11-Jun-03/7:09 PM |
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12-Jun-03/6:55 PM |
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What a lovely poem, and with a nice message. I love it!
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| Re: One Night Stand by Audaciouslilgrl |
13-Jun-03/2:25 PM |
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Wow...I really, really enjoyed that. Seriously. 10
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13-Jun-03/6:07 PM |
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| Re: How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8 |
13-Jun-03/6:11 PM |
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Probably the worst peice of crap I've ever read. -0- DING!
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| Re: My girl by simone_girard |
13-Jun-03/6:22 PM |
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uhm...a sonnet has 14 lines buddy...
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| Re: once again by John by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
14-Jun-03/4:23 PM |
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are you john? or is there another john we don't know about
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| Re: Full another terrific love ballad by John K.Y. by Bachus |
18-Jun-03/2:37 PM |
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| Re: missing time by Bill Z Bub |
20-Jun-03/5:30 PM |
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30-Jun-03/12:33 PM |
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