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once again by John

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Jun 2003 · Edited 13 Jun 2003 · 5 comments

Once again I’m broken faced Now it’s back to where I peed Just wished that we could be maced Hoping this love would last transfiguratively So now that we are finally dying I’ll never find someone as perfect as poop Wishing that we could try again crying Hoped this love didn’t have to poop And now you’re vomiting And I’m barely pooped Without crack <horus4president> Knowing that we will no longer see Always seems to get to decree I will never be able to free-bass All of those perfectly thrown frisbees You ran away with my coal I always tried to give you my pole Never wanted to let you up Because it’s you I can do every day, no problem And now you've left me all wet I’ve always loved you not yet grown Trying to find someone too, as you But nobody can replace my pal Pokie So as I watch you walk within me I know my life is forever pp <horus4dinner> I wish you would give me a shot-put Stop pretending to be who you’re not I will love you with all my toe-jam Because when you’re gone I fall in love with myself I just wish this didn’t have to be Because I’m broken hearted once again and I'm just ten, motherfuckers.

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5 comments

[n/a] richa 14-Jun-03/10:45 AM Reply
I dont understand your motivation for writing this.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> › richa 17-Jun-03/9:09 PM Reply
My motivation? Simple, to laugh, try it some time, go ahead read this out loud and try not to laugh.
[n/a] richa › <{Baba^Yaga}> 18-Jun-03/12:55 PM Reply
dark angel is so much better at railing against this kind of thing

i didn't laugh at poop maybe i'm getting old
[7] capachijim 14-Jun-03/4:23 PM Reply
are you john? or is there another john we don't know about
[n/a] deleted user › capachijim 14-Jun-03/4:52 PM Reply
No its a parody on my song Once Again which i posted b4 this one