| Re: I am Cuba by cacophony |
16-Oct-02/6:43 AM |
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| Re: Choices by Ojiboch |
16-Oct-02/6:44 AM |
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Nice. The business about paths makes me think of Robert Frost - the road not taken.
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| Re: haiku's i love but i cannot do them well enough by UAFANTHORPEY |
16-Oct-02/6:51 AM |
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I bet there's a eunuch haikuist out there somewhere.
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16-Oct-02/6:55 AM |
There's nothing wrong with a bit of archaic fantasy; pastiche is a powerful tool. You stay just the right side of the ridiculous.
Oh, by the way, Mr Horus8, what have I done to be hated so?
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16-Oct-02/6:55 AM |
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| Re: Daniela by little_angel_maria |
16-Oct-02/7:00 AM |
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I love a nice adolescent tantrum.
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16-Oct-02/7:11 AM |
This has a simplicity that is very effective.
By the way, there used to be a little known indie / britpop band called God's Boyfriend. Did they inspire you in your nomenclature?
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| Re: Stamp by worldsofwar |
18-Oct-02/1:39 AM |
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I think you've got some problems with meter.
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| Re: On the Swings by Christof |
18-Oct-02/1:46 AM |
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I remember swinging as hard as I could on the swing in my back garden, then deliberately jumping off as fast as I could. I never thought of the swing as an implement of destruction, though.
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| Re: purple and black gangstaz theme tune by rosiebailey |
18-Oct-02/4:24 AM |
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Are you Ali G's little brother?
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| Re: The ballad of woosie by rosiebailey |
18-Oct-02/4:26 AM |
I like the Charlie and the Chocolate Factory reference. Those Oompah Loompahs always used to frighten me when I was a kid.
I like the line about the squirrels - they're everywhere at the moment, stockpiling their nuts for winter.
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| Re: FHjk by Dark Angle |
18-Oct-02/4:28 AM |
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Sorry, but I think it's idiocy. Listening to The Streets raises the same dilemma, but I think in that case the answer is genius.
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| Re: The Limerick of Dave by worldsofwar |
18-Oct-02/4:30 AM |
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Pretty pants. If you're going to write a limerick, try and make it scan. Or else it's not a limerick, just a freaky rhyming poem.
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| Re: The generosity of others. by darby pyn |
20-Oct-02/4:28 AM |
This has a voice of its own, which is something very hard to achieve.
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| Re: A Sign on a Giant Donut at a Twenty Four Hour a Day Donut Shop Overlooking Pacific Coast Highway in Sunset Beach California at Eight in the Evening on September Twenty Fourth Two-Thousand and Two by Dark Angle |
20-Oct-02/5:07 AM |
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Hmm. Doughnuts is one of those words where the American spelling really annoys me for no real reason.
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22-Oct-02/1:14 AM |
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It's always the people who have comedy rings on their mobile phones and think it's really clever. This is a good subject, but not that good a treatment of it. Sorry.
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| Re: A love of the midlands by ==Doylum |
22-Oct-02/1:23 AM |
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I've never been to Telford. But I've been to Shrewsbury.
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| Re: Brothers and Sisters by bondjedi |
23-Oct-02/1:32 AM |
Interesting. Did you know that whn Isaac Newton was admitted to the Royal Society, they were investigating how to make insects out of cheese?
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| Re: One liners for the ladies by INTRANSIT |
23-Oct-02/7:38 AM |
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Isn't there somehting somewhat incestuous going on in the middle there?
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| Re: oedipus is raising a pint to me now by <~> |
23-Oct-02/7:40 AM |
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