Re: a comment on Hve you ever..... v2 by INTRANSIT	29-Oct-02/12:42 PM
well, i see the small trials angle of it, but you are complaining about them. now, as for the g-string, that's a nice thought, but i mostly 'go commando'.
Re: Hve you ever..... v2 by INTRANSIT	29-Oct-02/12:25 PM
the problem with this one is that it tells. i have no issue with a good bitch session now and again, and you've certainly earned one, but this one comes across as a litany of complaints about soul-shattering vignettes that are written off as unimportant. it spells everything out. it says, 'do i *have* to' or 'when are we going to *be* there'? it's whiny when you want it to be lonely. that's my take.
Re: a comment on Hve you ever..... v2 by INTRANSIT	29-Oct-02/12:21 PM
you can surf fo' free at the public library... much less than kinko's at .16/min...
Re: a comment on Faith by INTRANSIT	29-Oct-02/12:18 PM
what do you want from me on this one? you must have known it inside for it to come out as it did; that's part of the reason i write: to see things that cannot be seen with the eye.
Re: Hve you ever..... v2 by INTRANSIT	29-Oct-02/12:12 PM
is this the one you thought was better?
Re: a comment on In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~>	29-Oct-02/11:40 AM
not so much fun saturday night, but now it's somewhat amusing. apparently, i'm not 'intellectually stimulating' enough for the man. although he seemed to find other bits of me more than stimulating enough. okay, so it's still not so much fun.
Re: Ignoranus by Yardbird	29-Oct-02/4:36 AM
oh, very ni ce title ass well.
Re: Ignoranus by Yardbird	29-Oct-02/4:36 AM
perhaps he should have invited them to have a go at it with him instead?
Re: Worth the wait by INTRANSIT	29-Oct-02/4:35 AM
ah. yes. so it always is.
Re: a comment on advice for the heated by <~>	28-Oct-02/8:56 PM
actually, to the best of my knowledge, they have never even met in a cyber-backseat. so, i guess it's not really advice to them, but more to those who are budding naturalists, ahem.
Re: a comment on In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~>	28-Oct-02/8:38 PM
not really. vote early, vote often. this is an angry poem, and may well disappear soon, so get your votes in while you can.
Re: a comment on advice for the heated by <~>	28-Oct-02/8:37 PM
it is. temperatures change rapidly in a car when one is in the back seat
Re: a comment on In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~>	28-Oct-02/8:29 PM
suggestion?
Re: Mendacity by kiki	28-Oct-02/7:34 PM
not kiki freve, by chance?
Re: a comment on boy girl by little_angel_maria	28-Oct-02/5:38 PM
don't listen to DA; by the way, he *loves* to be called that--it stands for... lousy on ludes...or was that laid over linguine...or lucid on lsd...i forget.
Re: a comment on boy girl by little_angel_maria	28-Oct-02/5:11 PM
h-- i dyed my hair red today. you want a bitch slap? maria's only 14; i'm a little more and then some. and i'm red again, so get the fuck out the way. there is a power in red hair that i need right now. ask mrs.g. has she red? has she ever? what a goddess-trip it is. esp. long red hair. damn. still want a bitch slap? come on, von trapp... i am a reala poeta...and my aim is true
Re: a comment on Hedgehog's Dilemma by Shin-Bojangles	28-Oct-02/1:55 PM
ichor's the liquor that drips from his neck-bound cask: aphrodesiac... (apologies to batman ans the robots for going off-topic)
Re: a comment on For Flight by <~>	28-Oct-02/1:48 PM
you see, i *am* nude.
Re: a comment on For Flight by <~>	28-Oct-02/1:42 PM
a throwing star? could it be bronze, inscribed with the words 'love thy neighbor' on one side, and ''ass thyself' on the other, and could i have picked it up at a discount chain for next to nothing, due to the alleged typo, and might i imbed in in the forehead of one of the up-and-comings on the site? pretty please?
Re: boy girl by little_angel_maria	28-Oct-02/1:23 PM
maria, this is so far beyond the other stuff you have posted in quality as to be unreal. lose the 'scoots.' though. other than that, this is great. you conveyed a vivd picture of a moment succintly. nice job.