Re: a comment on Night-mare by INTRANSIT |
20-Nov-02/8:34 PM |
points for trying. show your wife. ask her. tehn write another. homework assignment #1.
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Re: Papa Smurf by Bachus |
20-Nov-02/8:28 PM |
because he can't get his hand away. it's glued firmly in place. that's why.
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Re: a comment on Night-mare by INTRANSIT |
20-Nov-02/8:24 PM |
duo was better by far. because there was a thirst driving it, and passion in it.
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Re: Night-mare by INTRANSIT |
20-Nov-02/8:20 PM |
this feels like clumsily-aimed cruelty. perhaps you will say it is brutal honesty, with a modicum of compassion. but i don't feel it. it is outside of you, and you are trying too hard to get in. false.
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Re: a comment on Orange Hills (Villanelle) by Moss |
20-Nov-02/7:18 PM |
yes. he does. i bring my own baggage to the reading of this. which is why i have not commented further, or voted on it yet. i read it and i like it, but iwanted it to be more strict and still woo me. and it seems to me that you could accomplish that. so i'll sit for a spell, and come back when i am...even.
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Re: a comment on Absence by newdawnfades |
20-Nov-02/2:44 PM |
psst...he doesn't have hair (much)!
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Re: a comment on The Sea by Moss |
20-Nov-02/12:07 PM |
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Re: a comment on my goat by joey |
20-Nov-02/11:25 AM |
are you saying joey's got a limited vocabulary?
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Re: a comment on my goat by joey |
20-Nov-02/11:12 AM |
isn't it like the pre-recorded history source? as in "ur hamlet"?
there were goats in prehistory, right?
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Re: a comment on Kindling by <~> |
20-Nov-02/10:11 AM |
yep. a wood burning stove. maybe i should reference that?
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Re: a comment on St. Germain & The Charismatically Uncomitted by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
20-Nov-02/10:08 AM |
baba, did your uterus fall out again?
is that why you're so cranky today?
there is so much anger on the site today. i'm guilty too.
but i'm feeling the love now, baby...feeling the love...
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Re: a comment on boy girl by little_angel_maria |
20-Nov-02/9:43 AM |
it's so tiny i can't see it
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Re: a comment on Orange Hills (Villanelle) by Moss |
20-Nov-02/9:02 AM |
you can even hear him read it on this site.
see that nicholas jones?
get a welshie to read it for you! and post it!
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Re: a comment on Orange Hills (Villanelle) by Moss |
20-Nov-02/9:01 AM |
yes. that part qualifies. but the essence of the vilanelle is the repeated lines over the event of the peom. see 'do not go gentle into that good night':
http://www.poets.org/poems/poems.cfm?prmID=1159
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Re: a comment on the pot collected water when it hid us from the rain by kiki |
20-Nov-02/8:50 AM |
back to the midlands, that you love so well?
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Re: a comment on the pot collected water when it hid us from the rain by kiki |
20-Nov-02/8:32 AM |
now you're speedy d?
why can't you just go back to being d, like i loved before? why does everything always have to change? what happened to your wings?
you should worry. you abandon me like that, and leave me all alone to defend myself against a girl whose claim to fame is that she likes cucmbers and her prof thinks she's good. thanks.
what's a girl to do?
i gave back his chainsaw, so i am now defenseless.
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Re: a comment on "Why would I need to get in touch with you?" by Limness |
20-Nov-02/8:26 AM |
the action of not thinking and saying. that he did not think when the words came out; that he did not thik what they would mean, what they did mean. also, it's like a physical blow, set apart like that--because i expected him to think, to care, to not be such a tool.
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Re: a comment on the pot collected water when it hid us from the rain by kiki |
20-Nov-02/8:22 AM |
i have a lot of theories about kiki. most of them knee-jerks, due to her suave bedside manner. but i have tried to keep my claws in. so far. she obviously thinks she's superior. too bad she doesn't understand that we are here to help each other get better. if she wants to be miss starshine, she can trot her ass off someplace else where only perfect poets post. or at least those endorsed by 'quite good' published poets and profs.
i wonder if he thinks she is as talented 'twixt the linen as on it. only the finest.
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Re: a comment on The Sea by Moss |
20-Nov-02/8:13 AM |
yes. give me something more, moss.
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Re: a comment on the pot collected water when it hid us from the rain by kiki |
20-Nov-02/8:11 AM |
they're part of it. they beat you down. there are comforts to be shared with others that will lift you up. dwell on whichever suits you. i have made my choice.
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