Re: a comment on Meditation 01 by Blue Magpie	15-Feb-03/10:45 PM
grease up your feet, and get your facts straight, if you are going to anthropomorphize. male lions attack their cubs. etc.
Re: Confusion by bsjones84	15-Feb-03/10:35 AM
bsjones84, thank you for commentng on my poem. i am sorry you found it vulgar, and, to be quite honest, i wondered about the poem's vulgarity after you made that remark. then i went back and read it. then i read your poems. and i realized that you have very little grasp of the use of metaphor as a poetic device, and therefore, you would naturally find my writing vulgar. i invite you to reread the poem, with the understanding that there is no sex happening in that particular poem. instead, i am using the excitement one feels at the promise of imminent copulation as a device to describe the excitement that words give to me, and to him. thank you for your time, pilgrim. p.s. i have plenty of poems where sex actually does happen, and they are far from vulgar in their descriptiveness, if that's what you're looking for. words ezxcite me. what can i say?
Re: a comment on Johannesburg 2002 by Blue Magpie	15-Feb-03/10:33 AM
oh my. where ever did you get this dirt????
Re: a comment on Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik	14-Feb-03/4:19 PM
:} dreamier.
Re: a comment on Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik	14-Feb-03/4:00 PM
it's the 'tea' that ruins it--not intimate enough/too casual...: mebbe sipping honeyed nectar, golden hued
Re: Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik	14-Feb-03/3:49 PM
nice. this is the weakest line: Sipping honey tea a golden hue
Re: Highlights From a Conversation at the Laundromat by bunniesnangels	14-Feb-03/3:47 PM
yeah. they called us 'in league with satan'! let's kick their asses! this is even worse than them saying shit about my mother! (oh, and fix the ???'s)
Re: a comment on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig	14-Feb-03/8:43 AM
dude, that ROCKS!!!!!
Re: a comment on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig	13-Feb-03/2:11 PM
we travelled around a lot. and drank ale a lot.
Re: a comment on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig	13-Feb-03/2:10 PM
see what comes of too much ale? i can't remember where we ate in york, then. we stayed at lancaster university. there was a pub in town called the penny barrel, or the penny bank, or something...
Re: a comment on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig	13-Feb-03/1:58 PM
i don't recall. i had so many good ales. we lunched at the black bull in haworth. good beer. good jacket potatoes.
Re: a comment on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig	13-Feb-03/1:19 PM
d-r-i-n-k-i-n-g a-l-e.
Re: Positivism and Behaviourism:They Suck by razorgrin	13-Feb-03/1:02 PM
i wondered about the cat hiding in the branches, and found this strangely parallel universe, where yggdrasil is not a tree, but an institute that researches uranium: http://www.earthisland.org/yggdrasil/uep.html now my question: is the salivation due to radiation damage in the soft tissues of the mouth, or is the cat ringing a bell in the treetops as the isotope decays?
Re: a comment on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig	13-Feb-03/11:48 AM
maybe. did your cacky pants have any straw in them? did they reek of frankinsence or myrrh? was it GOLD???? did baby Jesu leave a GOLDEN NUGGET in your knickers>????
Re: The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig	13-Feb-03/11:15 AM
thank you for the haiku.
Re: a comment on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig	13-Feb-03/11:13 AM
yorkshire is lovely, as i remember it. the stone...well, everything...very appealing to me. actually, the only time i felt the presence of a higher power on this earth, the only time i felt as thought organized religion might be onto something other than control and mass submission, i was standing on the flags in yorkminster cathedral. the sun was shattering across the stones, and the clock was chiming, and i felt SOMETHING. for once. in my life. and it felt good.
Re: acid flashback by brazen	13-Feb-03/8:39 AM
la
Re: Just Your Average 'Death' Poem by Owner of the Sky	13-Feb-03/8:10 AM
you taught me a new word. and i like how you used it: anamnesis. also, "Without so much as a by your leave" is strikingly protective and tender, used here. niely done.
Re: Languageing by ==Doylum	13-Feb-03/8:07 AM
how can ilisten when i am so caught up in looking at his face? he moves it.
Re: The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig	13-Feb-03/7:57 AM
do i know you?