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acid flashback (Free verse) by brazen >
Like shallow unsettled wateR
The sky above is set in cloudS
Tripped out features burrow into minD
Secret visions counter the reality you finD
From white to black to nothing at alL
Children leave the sky and to Earth they do falL
Briskly blowing away my wordS
Wind subdued noW
Resting with the birdS
Up the ladder:
Judgement
Down the ladder:
The Astronaut in Trouble
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Posted: February 13, 2003 8:16 AM PST; Last modified: February 13, 2003 8:16 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.9284782 Overall Rank: 9330 Comments:
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13-Feb-03/8:39 AM
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la
I was hoping for altered states, but what can you expect from a flashback as compared to the real deal.
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