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Free verse № 31070

Judgement

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Dec 2002 · 1 comment

I have waited my whole life for this. "I can't believe how long this line is." I whispered to the woman behind me. Progressively, I moved forward. Second in line, I could sense the anxiety of the man before me. His nerves controlled him. The tapping of his foot reminded me of the constant tick-tock on my old grandfather clock. In an instant, as if a flash of light, I felt the torturous presence of his predecessors, although they were gone, now he too had moved on. It was now my turn. I stood frozen. Former inhabitual constants such as breathing and blinking were suddenly the most of my struggles, and yet the least of my worries. My soul froze, wondering "Had I prepared myself?"

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[7] deleted user 24-Dec-02/6:25 PM Reply
again, another that seems to be a wonderful work in the making... you show amazing promise, yet some refining is in order...