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acid flashback (Free verse) by brazen

> Like shallow unsettled wateR The sky above is set in cloudS Tripped out features burrow into minD Secret visions counter the reality you finD From white to black to nothing at alL Children leave the sky and to Earth they do falL Briskly blowing away my wordS Wind subdued noW Resting with the birdS

<{Baba^Yaga}> 13-Feb-03/5:10 PM
I was hoping for altered states, but what can you expect from a flashback as compared to the real deal.




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