Re: a comment on Live by Luv2write	20-Mar-03/6:34 AM
get off it. we are so many ants. beloved ants, but ants. if there is a god, do you think he has stopped creating? do you think that he wants every single thing he has created to sing his praises 24-7? did he create us merely to fuel his ego? of does he thrive on cacophany? i, for one, cannot sing in tune. last time i was in church, i wasn't the only one. i guess your god is some sort of kidergarten teacher who loves the voices of all his creations raised and praising, like good little humans? and is it just us humans that need to praise him? what about the ants? are we decreasing the volume of god's praise when we kill ants? won't we be damned for that? personally, i think that god probably wants a nice fire and a glass of scotchbehind closed doors in his snug, now and again. no noise but the crackling of the spiders on the firewood. maybe that's why he's bring armageddon on us?
Re: The death of Bachus by <{Baba^Yaga}>	18-Mar-03/7:34 AM
dammit! why am i always the last to know!!!
Re: Third Period English by Sawa	18-Mar-03/7:34 AM
without a second thought, that's how.
Re: Tell me I suck by Blindproject217	18-Mar-03/7:33 AM
when i saw the title, i wanted to SOOOO BADLY!!! but i just can't now. still, there are gaping holes in this. sqeeze it alittle more--<drip, drip, drip> and see what there is to be seen when you unravel it a little more! bravo/a!
Re: While flipping over stones by <{Baba^Yaga}>	17-Mar-03/1:02 PM
hmm. not the cock i have been thinking on, but i can see how it works better for the poem that way. :|
Re: While flipping over stones by <{Baba^Yaga}>	17-Mar-03/12:13 PM
dammit! again, you miss the chance for the rhyme!!!!!
Re: Heirlooms by Bachus	17-Mar-03/12:05 PM
dammit. i was looking for 'cocks' to rhyme with 'clocks.' and you get all serious on me.
Re: Orders to My Zombie Legions by razorgrin	17-Mar-03/11:37 AM
razor!!! just for you: http://www.tshirthell.com/shirts/tshirt.php?sku=a208 xo, z
Re: Triptych: Rural by lastobelus	16-Mar-03/5:15 PM
excellent ending line in 1. much more satisfying. 2 works better without the punctuation. good call. 3 has amused me.
Re: a comment on hard as a rock by <~>	15-Mar-03/11:22 PM
just for you, yes. do you mind sharing the spotlight? a little?
Re: a comment on All Meta-Verse Shall be Deleted, it is Poison by middenHeap	14-Mar-03/7:32 AM
metrify yourself. form to follow function. this will help.
Re: a comment on sexy by elizabethann	14-Mar-03/7:31 AM
zacklee
Re: a comment on Maud, After the Death of her Daughter Lynn by middenHeap	14-Mar-03/7:28 AM
you are mean because you are hard as a sock. and, really, haven't you been tugging off for much longer than that full year? i noticed that stocks in moisturizing avocado "hand" creme have skyrocketed in the u.k. huzzah!
Re: a comment on hard as a rock by <~>	14-Mar-03/6:58 AM
that one's in the works, just for you, o mysterious one.
Re: a comment on sexy by elizabethann	14-Mar-03/6:54 AM
who says i'm not? a girl needs a hobby, luv.
Re: a comment on sexy by elizabethann	13-Mar-03/7:54 PM
you mean...she...got his goat? <ugh>
Re: Maud, After the Death of her Daughter Lynn by middenHeap	13-Mar-03/7:46 PM
doing his master's bidding, middenHeap's into the fray. oy vey! I suppose -that- no one really could --will help the meter When she over her cradle cooed --i know what you mean, but it reads awkwardly nice effort. excellent topic for a V. the grief-struck often do repeat and repeat, to force themselves to accept. very nice tie-in, there.
Re: a comment on hard as a rock by <~>	13-Mar-03/2:38 PM
i need more than 8, if you want a good spanking, baby.
Re: a comment on Orders to My Zombie Legions by razorgrin	13-Mar-03/2:18 PM
just as i suspected.
Re: Strung by bunniesnangels	13-Mar-03/2:18 PM
this cries to me for more of a beat: Women are pearls that you string, Slid one to another with a satisfying "plink." Each purchased alone, momentarily shone - and so on. somehow it makes it more vindictive for me that way. like you are ramming the words home, with each hard beat.