| Re: Third Period English by Sawa |
18-Mar-03/7:34 AM |
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without a second thought, that's how.
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| Re: Tell me I suck by Blindproject217 |
18-Mar-03/7:33 AM |
when i saw the title, i wanted to SOOOO BADLY!!! but i just can't now.
still, there are gaping holes in this. sqeeze it alittle more--<drip, drip, drip> and see what there is to be seen when you unravel it a little more! bravo/a!
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| Re: While flipping over stones by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
17-Mar-03/1:02 PM |
hmm. not the cock i have been thinking on, but i can see how it works better for the poem that way.
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| Re: While flipping over stones by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
17-Mar-03/12:13 PM |
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dammit! again, you miss the chance for the rhyme!!!!!
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| Re: Heirlooms by Bachus |
17-Mar-03/12:05 PM |
dammit. i was looking for 'cocks' to rhyme with 'clocks.'
and you get all serious on me.
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| Re: Orders to My Zombie Legions by razorgrin |
17-Mar-03/11:37 AM |
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| Re: Triptych: Rural by lastobelus |
16-Mar-03/5:15 PM |
excellent ending line in 1. much more satisfying.
2 works better without the punctuation. good call.
3 has amused me.
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| Re: a comment on hard as a rock by <~> |
15-Mar-03/11:22 PM |
just for you, yes.
do you mind sharing the spotlight? a little?
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| Re: a comment on All Meta-Verse Shall be Deleted, it is Poison by middenHeap |
14-Mar-03/7:32 AM |
metrify yourself.
form to follow function. this will help.
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| Re: a comment on sexy by elizabethann |
14-Mar-03/7:31 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Maud, After the Death of her Daughter Lynn by middenHeap |
14-Mar-03/7:28 AM |
you are mean because you are hard as a sock. and, really, haven't you been tugging off for much longer than that full year?
i noticed that stocks in moisturizing avocado "hand" creme have skyrocketed in the u.k.
huzzah!
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| Re: a comment on hard as a rock by <~> |
14-Mar-03/6:58 AM |
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that one's in the works, just for you, o mysterious one.
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| Re: a comment on sexy by elizabethann |
14-Mar-03/6:54 AM |
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who says i'm not? a girl needs a hobby, luv.
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| Re: a comment on sexy by elizabethann |
13-Mar-03/7:54 PM |
you mean...she...got his goat?
<ugh>
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| Re: Maud, After the Death of her Daughter Lynn by middenHeap |
13-Mar-03/7:46 PM |
doing his master's bidding,
middenHeap's into the fray.
oy vey!
I suppose -that- no one really could
--will help the meter
When she over her cradle cooed
--i know what you mean, but it reads awkwardly
nice effort. excellent topic for a V. the grief-struck often do repeat and repeat, to force themselves to accept. very nice tie-in, there.
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| Re: a comment on hard as a rock by <~> |
13-Mar-03/2:38 PM |
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i need more than 8, if you want a good spanking, baby.
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| Re: a comment on Orders to My Zombie Legions by razorgrin |
13-Mar-03/2:18 PM |
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| Re: Strung by bunniesnangels |
13-Mar-03/2:18 PM |
this cries to me for more of a beat:
Women are pearls that you string,
Slid one to another with a satisfying "plink."
Each purchased alone, momentarily shone
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and so on.
somehow it makes it more vindictive for me that way. like you are ramming the words home, with each hard beat.
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| Re: a comment on hard as a rock by <~> |
13-Mar-03/2:12 PM |
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wrong is right, oh follower of the penultimate.
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| Re: Orders to My Zombie Legions by razorgrin |
13-Mar-03/2:05 PM |
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ARE YOU WEARING THE HORN-ED HAT, VALKYRIE????
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