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Third Period English (Other) by Sawa
The girl across from us sits With a shining stare. Poetry from her lips spit, Beady eyes aflare. Words fly from her chubby jaw, Falling to the ground; Jutting teeth from gaping maw Mangling the sound. She stumbles and sprays as we Grimace in dismay. How could that hag turn beauty Into sheer blase?

Up the ladder: The lightest touch
Down the ladder: in a singular way

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2
Weighted score: 5.1430435
Overall Rank: 5364
Posted: March 17, 2003 7:53 PM PST; Last modified: March 17, 2003 7:53 PM PST
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[9] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 18-Mar-03/1:00 AM | Reply
Great.
[8] <~> @ 172.138.222.32 | 18-Mar-03/7:34 AM | Reply
without a second thought, that's how.
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