| Re: why you change?.. by shadowanime2 |
17-Nov-04/1:14 AM |
Incomprehensible. I
hope
this is
a joke.
I hate
it.
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| Re: can't you tell me? by hendrimike |
18-Nov-04/9:31 AM |
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My guess: A horrible attempt at a song. Don't do it again.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
18-Nov-04/9:34 AM |
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No one will ever eat your beauty? What the hell. I know what you are getting at, but this is just crap.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
20-Nov-04/5:54 AM |
My eyes
Came across your poem
I wont read this anymore
I can't read this anymore
4.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
20-Nov-04/6:00 AM |
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Clustered cliches cause crainial concussions. Bah! My freakin head! 5.
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| Re: Bitches by blackdeathangel6 |
27-Nov-04/10:43 AM |
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So much angst. I'm glad you found a way to vent: bitching, and calling it poetry. Good try! 1!
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| Re: leaning back to far by celticskatermatt1 |
27-Nov-04/10:47 AM |
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TOO. CALAMITY. Microsoft(C) Word Spell Checker.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Dec-04/11:34 AM |
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I wonder why nobody ever commented on this.
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| Re: don't know by the_poetess |
9-Mar-05/2:34 AM |
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Noone will ever understand your pain. LOL!!!!11
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| Re: Horus8 & The Werewolves Live... by horus8 |
18-Sep-05/12:23 PM |
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How the fuck do you expect me to get to LA by 7:45? I'll give you a 10 for originality.
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| Re: Dustin by Fire_is_cool |
18-Sep-05/12:26 PM |
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Is this a joke? If it is, than it's pretty damn funny; if it's not... it's still pretty damn funny.
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| Re: My Wish by Fire_is_cool |
18-Sep-05/12:31 PM |
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You know, you can't just paste a bunch of cliches together and call it a poem. This should constitute as plagiarism. I'll give you a "1" because you spelled everything right.
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| Re: I'm a faggot by mrs smith |
1-Jul-06/3:18 AM |
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| Re: How to Bleed by MacFrantic |
1-Jul-06/3:22 AM |
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| Re: only you by celticskatermatt1 |
1-Jul-06/3:30 AM |
Hi Matt.
Listen to CherokeeRoseLoggins, or else.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
30-Jul-06/11:29 PM |
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I posted this on another site and no one seemed to get it . Hopefully there are smarter people here.
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| Re: fuck you by gsosville |
10-Aug-06/1:21 PM |
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I think that comma should be a semicolon. The poem will still be real shitty, but at least it will look better.
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| Re: I Got the Romanian Flea-Bitten Blues by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
11-Aug-06/10:11 PM |
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Truly an original subject and entertaining at that. I'll give it a ten for saying troopies, if for nothing else.
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| Re: Sarah Hine's Cries by rahson_s |
11-Aug-06/10:15 PM |
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Well Sara, You better hope you don't live in Vegas, New York, or Miami because CSI will find the truth. They don't fuck around.
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| Re: How To Ride a Bicycle by Dovina |
11-Aug-06/10:19 PM |
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