Re: a comment on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig	14-Feb-03/5:25 AM
Yes my dear, yorkshire is beautiful and i am so pleased an American visited somewhere other than London, I hope you found your heathcliff my mellifluent Cathy, a Wild Zzinnia amongst other flowers of Yorkshires finest. I say, what a delightful thought.
Re: a comment on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig	14-Feb-03/5:20 AM
Not true Dark, Caducus had no third line in any of his comments so I suggest you find an abacasse because your comment is bunkum.
Re: a comment on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig	13-Feb-03/9:46 AM
haiku's are an primarily an appreciation of nature. All one was trying to say was that is A law of evolution that Cheetahs hunt Gazelle's, that they are superior in speed, the nature of certain carnivores can be as beautiful as the physical herbivores, in this case the gazelle, (a completely useless animal that smells repugnant and is actually more likely to bite you on a safari in the serengeti than a reclusive cheetah who is more worried about his cubs being meaninglessly slayed by the lazy lion). It is also a law of evolution that animals copy humans, one of the only aspects even the most highly evolved species have not been able to copy though is QUEING UP. I sincerely hope my answer is sufficient, and that I have bored you so much you cant stop yawning, which is advantageous because while your yawning, your not swearing. You remind me of me as a young whip my boy, lets get on, theirs no need to call me a mother fucker, my mother died 10 years ago God rest her soul, so she's hardly up for it my boy now is she?
Re: a comment on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig	13-Feb-03/9:34 AM
Now Now Dark Angel don't take that tone with me young man. I will answer your question but you should not swear in the forum where ladies are present. For a man who considers himself of the higher classes you should be ashamed as it is not the behaviour I would expect from an intelligent man like yourself.
Re: a comment on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig	13-Feb-03/9:23 AM
In my defence Cad, no malevolence was intended it was a mere gesture of kindness for my grasp of language was enhanced by her fine work, she is stateside and I, Well I just a middle class squire from the Jade blade dales of Yorkshire. One hopes the poem of beauty is appreciated by beauty.
Re: Starving at Tiffany's by horus8	12-Feb-03/8:31 AM
At last we meet sir I have read your work and like your sensitive pieces best, sarcasm is inferior to you only entertain it when the devil on your shoulder sits on its chip and teases the Angel for being so tedious. By the way this is a keeper my young fry.....8
Re: The Eye by Enki	12-Feb-03/8:23 AM
Cant for the life of me underststand your point in this? -no vote
Re: Dust by Caducus	12-Feb-03/8:19 AM
you really ripped your guts open in this, heartfelt and characteristically your finest.
Re: The Eskimo and the fish by INTRANSIT	12-Feb-03/8:16 AM
your intro's are always your strongest asset, the last Stan seems rushed which is a shame for otherwise its a strong piece of lit....7
Re: a comment on Mother Earth by DewDrop	11-Feb-03/5:37 AM
then change it, one would be a buffoon not to.
Re: "Dreams Come and Dreams Go" by Pooh_N_His_Honey	11-Feb-03/2:09 AM
too much said in a generic narrative here, try avaoiding the obvious descriptions of lament. However keep on trying, writing is a friend of solace >5
Re: Mother Earth by DewDrop	11-Feb-03/2:01 AM
You need to condense the points you are making because the irony you evoke in this poem is very apt. Catherine Zeta Jones in the outback of nicaragua would be a just sentence, liked the point you so nearly made in this _____7