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The Eye (Other) by Enki The mask I wear is never seen.
It hides the I which is obscene.
It serves a purpose most oblique.
The face it shows is rather bleak.
Were I to show the inner I.
The ego would be heard to cry.
Were I to take off mask most dashing.
The sound heard would be of teeth gnashing.
Up the ladder:
Great Waters of End
Down the ladder:
The Boys and Girls Club of London
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Posted: February 12, 2003 7:56 AM PST; Last modified: February 12, 2003 7:56 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7658 Comments:
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Mr Pig @ 62.105.88.10
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12-Feb-03/8:23 AM
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Cant for the life of me underststand your point in this? -no vote
The elephant man, without oldman.
I wouldn't bother with the rhyme. This poem pretends to be profound then rhymes dashing and gnashing. It just seems a bit daft
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