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The Eye (Other) by Enki

The mask I wear is never seen. It hides the I which is obscene. It serves a purpose most oblique. The face it shows is rather bleak. Were I to show the inner I. The ego would be heard to cry. Were I to take off mask most dashing. The sound heard would be of teeth gnashing.

richa 10-Jul-03/4:27 AM
I wouldn't bother with the rhyme. This poem pretends to be profound then rhymes dashing and gnashing. It just seems a bit daft




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