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Re: CoffeeNoBody by webguy 1-Aug-02/1:44 PM
i thought so too my self it's just that it is so common a fakery that you can identify it. I'm not professing great poetry if that's what you call it...its just an emotional explosion.

the fact that it ellicited a reaction from you makes it a recognizable and thus, Human (not artificially-crafted) experience
Re: love cycle by j_beckfield 22-Jul-02/8:41 AM
want to add love less? love fool
love hurts hehehe...
great play on words hopeless hapless
Re: To Kiss by Jody Conn 22-Jul-02/8:26 AM
your poem is a case in point that clich??s and worn out adjectives and metaphors can still work. Good Job!
Re: Little Tub of Joy by Modulo 22-Jul-02/8:14 AM
Well, I do not think
A fungal infestation
Can bring happiness. :-)
Re: Summer Haiku by waltfreakinwhitman 16-Jul-02/8:59 AM
great note on a common misconception
Re: Birth by nentwined 16-Jul-02/8:16 AM
image/image/image....good job
Re: Smaller by Modulo 16-Jul-02/8:05 AM
maybe what? i didnt get it
Re: Love Poem by ferociouskitty 16-Jul-02/8:03 AM
your haiku is great:
hails the concept of being
in a master stroke.
Re: supply and remand by mogwai 12-Jul-02/4:00 AM
i dont get it "remand?'??
Re: la petite mort by poetekzen 12-Jul-02/3:58 AM
SIGNING "I love you" makes it work...(signing as i see it makes it a pact, not just lust, but mutual consent to the sinful sex crime: an affair that both parties acknowledge to be wrong but ritually observe anyways...) Affairs as true love is debatable but most people believe that. You captured that here.
Re: Lonely Soul by faded_twilight 12-Jul-02/3:51 AM
Crying my eyes out My heart's bleeding is clich??; try new word marriages, that'll make it work


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