Re: Lonely Soul by faded_twilight	12-Jul-02/3:51 AM
Crying my eyes out My heart's bleeding is clich??; try new word marriages, that'll make it work
Re: la petite mort by poetekzen	12-Jul-02/3:58 AM
SIGNING "I love you" makes it work...(signing as i see it makes it a pact, not just lust, but mutual consent to the sinful sex crime: an affair that both parties acknowledge to be wrong but ritually observe anyways...) Affairs as true love is debatable but most people believe that. You captured that here.
Re: supply and remand by mogwai	12-Jul-02/4:00 AM
i dont get it "remand?'??
Re: Love Poem by ferociouskitty	16-Jul-02/8:03 AM
your haiku is great: hails the concept of being in a master stroke.
Re: Smaller by Modulo	16-Jul-02/8:05 AM
maybe what? i didnt get it
Re: Birth by nentwined	16-Jul-02/8:16 AM
image/image/image....good job
Re: Summer Haiku by waltfreakinwhitman	16-Jul-02/8:59 AM
great note on a common misconception
Re: Little Tub of Joy by Modulo	22-Jul-02/8:14 AM
Well, I do not think A fungal infestation Can bring happiness. :-)
Re: To Kiss by Jody Conn	22-Jul-02/8:26 AM
your poem is a case in point that clich??s and worn out adjectives and metaphors can still work. Good Job!
Re: love cycle by j_beckfield	22-Jul-02/8:41 AM
want to add love less? love fool love hurts hehehe... great play on words hopeless hapless
Re: CoffeeNoBody by webguy	1-Aug-02/1:44 PM
i thought so too my self it's just that it is so common a fakery that you can identify it. I'm not professing great poetry if that's what you call it...its just an emotional explosion. the fact that it ellicited a reaction from you makes it a recognizable and thus, Human (not artificially-crafted) experience