on Birth by nentwined
16 Jul 2002, 8:16 AM
image/image/image....good job
on supply and remand by mogwai
12 Jul 2002, 4:00 AM
i dont get it "remand?'??
on CoffeeNoBody by webguy
1 Aug 2002, 1:44 PM
i thought so too my self it's just that it is so common a fakery that you can identify it. I'm not professing great poetry if that's what you call it...its just an emotional explosion.
the fact that it ellicited a reaction from you makes it a recognizable and thus, Human (not artificially-crafted) experience
the fact that it ellicited a reaction from you makes it a recognizable and thus, Human (not artificially-crafted) experience
on love cycle by j_beckfield
22 Jul 2002, 8:41 AM
want to add love less? love fool
love hurts hehehe...
great play on words hopeless hapless
love hurts hehehe...
great play on words hopeless hapless
on Little Tub of Joy by Modulo
22 Jul 2002, 8:14 AM
Well, I do not think
A fungal infestation
Can bring happiness. :-)
A fungal infestation
Can bring happiness. :-)
on Love Poem by ferociouskitty
16 Jul 2002, 8:03 AM
your haiku is great:
hails the concept of being
in a master stroke.
hails the concept of being
in a master stroke.
on Summer Haiku by waltfreakinwhitman
16 Jul 2002, 8:59 AM
great note on a common misconception
on Lonely Soul by faded_twilight
12 Jul 2002, 3:51 AM
Crying my eyes out My heart's bleeding is clich??; try new word marriages, that'll make it work
on la petite mort by poetekzen
12 Jul 2002, 3:58 AM
SIGNING "I love you" makes it work...(signing as i see it makes it a pact, not just lust, but mutual consent to the sinful sex crime: an affair that both parties acknowledge to be wrong but ritually observe anyways...) Affairs as true love is debatable but most people believe that. You captured that here.