replying on Tropical afternoon by cpill
18 Jun 2007, 4:39 PM
Yes perhaps thats the wrong word to use. I wanted to convey that hot and "flushed" (perhaps a better word than hot) feeling or the end of hard emotion, like I would imagine a female menstruation. An though you feel the sticky wet as a a discomfort its actually like the cold rain at the end of a hot day.
replying on Today could be the last day by cpill
13 Jul 2006, 2:10 AM
DAG! A typeo. I can't believe I didn't see that. If I edit I lose these comments :( Guess it stays.
"Whims..." line was intended to reflect on the "People", the every day us, and how we allow ourselves to victims of circumstance.
The theme, I guess, is about awareness of the moment. Awareness of life/time passing. It could be the last day for the narrator as it could be the last day for us all, and with that as the back drop to experience, even the ordinary seems crisp and alive.
Thanks for your comment (and correction!), I'd not really analysed it much until now.
"Whims..." line was intended to reflect on the "People", the every day us, and how we allow ourselves to victims of circumstance.
The theme, I guess, is about awareness of the moment. Awareness of life/time passing. It could be the last day for the narrator as it could be the last day for us all, and with that as the back drop to experience, even the ordinary seems crisp and alive.
Thanks for your comment (and correction!), I'd not really analysed it much until now.
on Relief (Ventilation Shaft rewrite) by cyan9
27 Jan 2006, 7:22 AM
wow. Thats awesome!
on Send The Devil... by horus8
20 Nov 2005, 6:59 AM
My my you grow like a coral reef
And I will always want to cut me feet
And I will always want to cut me feet
on Emotionally Unavailable by horus8
24 Jun 2005, 6:58 PM
humm, naked but filling
on For Katrina by BiggRobb
24 Apr 2005, 1:43 PM
Constantly, never acting
Hiding
I, can, never, get,
courage?
Even if I find it, I wonât know how to use it
So inexperienced eats
behind crowds
I lag, they move
everyday,
more, more I want
time Reminded all of you
How to deal?
I can't look in your face.
I walk behind
won't speak, The words come
you leave
why won't I chance Another missed?
Constantly...
Hiding
I, can, never, get,
courage?
Even if I find it, I wonât know how to use it
So inexperienced eats
behind crowds
I lag, they move
everyday,
more, more I want
time Reminded all of you
How to deal?
I can't look in your face.
I walk behind
won't speak, The words come
you leave
why won't I chance Another missed?
Constantly...
on Chrystal lane swift want's me, bad. by horus8
10 Apr 2005, 11:37 AM
Fuck yeah!
on Teen Machine by unknown
14 Aug 2002, 11:28 PM
I like the imagery, the choice of nouns. I'm curious what the inspiration for it was?