on ME AGAIN by oldschool
12 Jul 2006, 2:50 PM
Thats some funny sh!t
on some deleted poem
14 Aug 2002, 11:19 PM
Its nice to explore
on Teen Machine by unknown
14 Aug 2002, 11:28 PM
I like the imagery, the choice of nouns. I'm curious what the inspiration for it was?
on Chrystal lane swift want's me, bad. by horus8
10 Apr 2005, 11:37 AM
Fuck yeah!
on For Katrina by BiggRobb
24 Apr 2005, 1:43 PM
Constantly, never acting
Hiding
I, can, never, get,
courage?
Even if I find it, I wonât know how to use it
So inexperienced eats
behind crowds
I lag, they move
everyday,
more, more I want
time Reminded all of you
How to deal?
I can't look in your face.
I walk behind
won't speak, The words come
you leave
why won't I chance Another missed?
Constantly...
Hiding
I, can, never, get,
courage?
Even if I find it, I wonât know how to use it
So inexperienced eats
behind crowds
I lag, they move
everyday,
more, more I want
time Reminded all of you
How to deal?
I can't look in your face.
I walk behind
won't speak, The words come
you leave
why won't I chance Another missed?
Constantly...
on Emotionally Unavailable by horus8
24 Jun 2005, 6:58 PM
humm, naked but filling
on some deleted poem
6 Jul 2005, 3:35 PM
Wow, this is brilliant! "Ali-Baba-like shouted commands", so spot on and yet form out of the blue. Things like that make me feel meagre and talent less.
Hummm, time to read the other 93 me thinks
Hummm, time to read the other 93 me thinks
on some deleted poem
6 Jul 2005, 3:07 PM
ultra corny
on some deleted poem
6 Jul 2005, 3:12 PM
playful
on Send The Devil... by horus8
20 Nov 2005, 6:59 AM
My my you grow like a coral reef
And I will always want to cut me feet
And I will always want to cut me feet
on Relief (Ventilation Shaft rewrite) by cyan9
27 Jan 2006, 7:22 AM
wow. Thats awesome!