regarding some deleted poem... |
14-Aug-02/11:19 PM |
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Re: Teen Machine by unknown |
14-Aug-02/11:28 PM |
I like the imagery, the choice of nouns. I'm curious what the inspiration for it was?
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Re: Harvest by Bachus |
19-Aug-04/4:00 AM |
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Re: Chrystal lane swift want's me, bad. by horus8 |
10-Apr-05/11:37 AM |
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Re: Escapism by vulcan |
24-Apr-05/1:27 PM |
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Re: For Katrina by BiggRobb |
24-Apr-05/1:43 PM |
Constantly, never acting
Hiding
I, can, never, get,
courage?
Even if I find it, I wonât know how to use it
So inexperienced eats
behind crowds
I lag, they move
everyday,
more, more I want
time Reminded all of you
How to deal?
I can't look in your face.
I walk behind
won't speak, The words come
you leave
why won't I chance Another missed?
Constantly...
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Re: Emotionally Unavailable by horus8 |
24-Jun-05/6:58 PM |
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regarding some deleted poem... |
6-Jul-05/3:07 PM |
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regarding some deleted poem... |
6-Jul-05/3:12 PM |
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regarding some deleted poem... |
6-Jul-05/3:35 PM |
Wow, this is brilliant! "Ali-Baba-like shouted commands", so spot on and yet form out of the blue. Things like that make me feel meagre and talent less.
Hummm, time to read the other 93 me thinks
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Re: Send The Devil... by horus8 |
20-Nov-05/6:59 AM |
My my you grow like a coral reef
And I will always want to cut me feet
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Re: Relief (Ventilation Shaft rewrite) by cyan9 |
27-Jan-06/7:22 AM |
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Re: ME AGAIN by oldschool |
12-Jul-06/2:50 PM |
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