Re: Done with all the mess by ILoveUandHim	12-May-03/10:10 PM
What if you said "that's a promise motherfucker" don't you feel that would be more poignant?
Re: fuck that bitch by Lucifer	12-May-03/10:19 PM
Very lucid and I'm sure rewarding.
Re: form: haiku cinquain by Poetsettle	14-May-03/6:49 AM
Well, isn't this pleasant. Taming your hair again I see.
Re: form: aware by Poetsettle	14-May-03/7:01 AM
Your new homepage is simply a work of infinite joy. I am moved. I knew you had the gift, but lordy, lordy. Sheer genius. As perfect as a steaming clump of peat. "Yet heretofore" This opening was most delightful to mine eye. So was that you flipping me off then a while back with the greeting card? how you got a luscious asian hotty into the body of a 60 some odd year old lord of the graphic arts manor. A work of pumping valor, I tell you. I am wheeping openly in a tinfoil protected room currently, dodging solar flares, but I'll come out for some of your fine tutilage. And send me all of the books ASAP, I want to steal some of your sacred oats of regularitty.
Re: Darkness ( A tribute to the poem FOOTPRINTS) by Mr Pig	17-May-03/3:24 PM
ha ha hee. KabooM!
regarding some deleted poem...	21-May-03/12:15 AM
'tis.
regarding some deleted poem...	21-May-03/2:56 AM
Two yous should be yours.
Re: I Am(Defined) by lil cindy lu who	27-May-03/7:51 PM
Likable enough.
Re: Then again who really fucked me over by Freethinker1602	27-May-03/8:12 PM
The pepsi challenge beats tab in the polls.
Re: Being Here by Miggy	27-May-03/8:15 PM
"And for that one day that will be together" we'll
regarding some deleted poem...	28-May-03/7:20 PM
Good lordy hips and olives... Splurt, ahhhhhh. Geez, i'll do this on the thirtieth, can i?
Re: Hollow Dreams by Alyssa91	29-May-03/11:40 AM
Have you tried a logenze?
Re: Lonely Love. by Exiled_humanity	30-May-03/12:38 PM
The last stanza saved your ass, because it's posh up until that last pretty step.
Re: Luekemia Tacosalad by Shardik	30-May-03/12:46 PM
Why don't you do the Phillip seymour story instead Shardik. You seem to have some left handed gusto today, you fucking write it asshole. I'm going to light some vanilla incense and put in a Depeche Mode live CD and make an avacado tuna bagel medium toasted and diced picles in the tuna, touch of garlic and green onion, pour myself a glass of guava juice (fresh) with eight ice cubes. Okay?
Re: ~Dreams by Misha Sanz	30-May-03/12:48 PM
Well yeah?
Re: ~Ode to My Hand by Misha Sanz	30-May-03/12:50 PM
Pretentious and totally center field. Cool structure however and simple enough to have a sense of a balance somewhere in its edited future.
Re: Eric D. Brock by elizabethann	30-May-03/12:52 PM
fruitcake flame'
Re: ~For Katie on her Birthday by Misha Sanz	30-May-03/12:58 PM
There are some lovely images here, and powerfully simple details. Plus I'm a sucker for Azure. I once dated the most beautiful American indian lass named Azure she was incredibly attractive, and passionate. I met her at a party and sold her some shrooms, and she left with me, it was winter in Michigan, and my car's passenger window and sunroof were blown out and I had plastic over them, my car looked like a fucking submarine/hoopdie I was so embarassed because when you hit 50 or so the cabin would pressurize it was really funny, but she could of cared less ahhhh youth. Wasn't it preciously disposable.
Re: For Some Have Entertained Angels by kassanna	2-Jun-03/8:48 PM
Good lord I think you've done it. Let's just say this poem redefines American poetry, thankyou, now I can die completely ruined and lonely. Could you possibly shove a peanut butter kiss right up my ass? Thanks. If you meet some resistance , fear not, that's just vipersna trying to breath, ignore and push harder.
Re: Invasion by INTRANSIT	2-Jun-03/9:55 PM
That's funny. Thanks for the email trickster, the other day. You're right it's been a blast, and to me worth every hour. Thanks for your critiques. I think I'm drunk or just gay now, but what the fuck right?! This sight has really taken my writing further than I would of ever thought plausible, and in the long run, as someone that needs writing more then anything else I believe. I believe that in itself to 'be' the real 'gift' behind Kaolin Fire's poemranker.com whether it was -=Dark_Angels=- sheer fucking brilliance, or Zinnia's eloquence, Settles insanity, or God's wife's passion I was there, you have Intransit's courage, Razorgrin's wit, Katie nievity, Nentwind's insomniatic chirpings, Beel Z bubs anectdotes, and Beakism's beak I was there, motherfucker, deal with that. I read poetry sixteen hours a day. I am a poet. I am crazy enough to say that with a sneer of contempt, and pull out my cock an piss on your shoe with a belch, fart, hello. Poemranker gave me the armor encased penis to do a thing that brazenly superior. People say, "how did you find the time? "I think" how couldn't I find the time?" I'm a writer, that's what I do with my time. I write as much as I fucking can; That's all I'm good at, and, as with everything else on this accursed planet, sometimes I aint even good at that. Poemranker is a good place to bring up your kids, trust me, I know, I live here.