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Hollow Dreams (Other) by Alyssa91
Shaken free of hollow dreams
An ice-cold sweat thatâs taken me
Past hell and brimstone, harp and angel
Left here in misery, left all the stranger
No white knight to slay my dragons
Only salt tears, which seem to drag on
Down my cheek, where reabsorbed
Reminding me I canât ignore
The pulsing, spreading, ice-cold sensation
That breaks my bones and causes tension
Between heart and mind, and mind and heart
And soon the world will split apart
And fall, will I, through cave-like chasms
Back into all those hollow dreams
Where I know that I will ever be
The object of love and affection
Not, as is truth, of plague and affliction
And hell and brimstone, harp and angel
Will bear alone the weight of my anger
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8561
Posted: May 29, 2003 6:55 AM PDT; Last modified: May 29, 2003 6:55 AM PDT
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