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Sunny Day (Free verse) by geewhiz1962 I opened my eyes one bright sunny day
I looked for a friend, I had something to say
I had dreamed that eve, it was special you see
My world was happy, in my dreams such glee
Why can't I have a friend with which I could share
The happiness of dreams, one to make me part of a pair
So many people, so little time,
I wish I could share or not need this rhyme
Up the ladder:
Hollow Dreams
Down the ladder:
calling pain to the surface
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Posted: June 18, 2003 4:17 PM PDT; Last modified: June 18, 2003 4:17 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9602656 Overall Rank: 8556 Comments:
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19-Sep-03/2:31 PM
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I wish you didn't need the rhyme either. looking for something is better than waiting for nothing.
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