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Free verse № 53315

Sunny Day

Member since 2003 · Posted 18 Jun 2003 · 1 comment

I opened my eyes one bright sunny day I looked for a friend, I had something to say I had dreamed that eve, it was special you see My world was happy, in my dreams such glee Why can't I have a friend with which I could share The happiness of dreams, one to make me part of a pair So many people, so little time, I wish I could share or not need this rhyme

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[7] deleted user 19-Sep-03/2:31 PM Reply
I wish you didn't need the rhyme either. looking for something is better than waiting for nothing.