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calling pain to the surface (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
The pain inside me longing to break out
I try to turn away and no matter
Which direction itâs the same thing always pain
I look it in the eyes it commands me
I fall at its feet and weep
The evil enjoys my suffering
The pain softly whispers to me
I have every option cut off
I canât do anything for I have fallen
Find the light for me and help me again
Iâm screaming now while the music plays
My life ventures on and never stops
Careening from my control
I canât stop it I remember it all
All the pain flooding back
From the memories are they the truth
How could it be that agonizing
The truth I try to ignore
Itâs all there it wonât go away
I cry out in the voice of a child
No oneâs there to hear it
I face this sting alone
Touch my hand and give me faith
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Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8563
Posted: July 18, 2003 12:59 PM PDT; Last modified: July 18, 2003 12:59 PM PDT
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