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20 most recent comments by Jeremi B. Handrinos (321-340)

Re: Dumbfounded, dumbfucked by Bane 24-Apr-03/11:46 PM
A sound contraption.
regarding some deleted poem... 25-Apr-03/8:51 PM
Once I had a lemonade stand that only served to the four legged. But then it got impounded by the law.
Re: Released by INTRANSIT 27-Apr-03/10:17 PM
Yes.
Re: Round Here by asimpleman 27-Apr-03/10:22 PM
Well, round here, a double double with cheese (animal style) meal deal at In & out is 5 bucks, and that my friend is Democracy with a vanilla sheik and change for a pack of gum.
regarding some deleted poem... 2-May-03/12:35 PM
Hand towels and grout my friend. Thoses are the staples of life.
regarding some deleted poem... 2-May-03/12:38 PM
Yes, sometimes chemistry goes well beyond chemicals. Well beyond God.
regarding some deleted poem... 2-May-03/4:26 PM
I would call this simply. "A hump for Jesus" Thereby, forcing the reader to ponder the immensity of such an act inthe title out the gate. Then your poem will garnish the side of the plate (title) like a sprite toss of parsely should should indeed always garnish the side of say, a plate. Or you could just call it "A plate". What do you think?
regarding some deleted poem... 2-May-03/4:54 PM
I was amused, hence the blue ten.
regarding some deleted poem... 4-May-03/5:40 PM
with a sigh or a grunt?
Re: we're insane by nolan 4-May-03/5:44 PM
Perhaps, it's the cotton candy wind chimes a chiming. Then again it could be the knock of fortune at the mother door.
regarding some deleted poem... 4-May-03/5:47 PM
How about chorus times 5 and a half? With no fade out, ever.
regarding some deleted poem... 4-May-03/6:31 PM
Please tell me this was an exercise in pure cynicism. Because this is to poetry what kareokee is to poetry.
regarding some deleted poem... 4-May-03/6:39 PM
I personally feel at a loss when I'm grasping art that I cannot sense.
Re: Crush Rejected by thepinkbunnyofdoom 4-May-03/7:10 PM
I cried or wept blood would be a stonger action.
The Eldorado reference sucks and so does the emo thing lose them, and then maybe you'll be closer. To what? I have no fucking clue.
Re: We be free by blurryphotograph 4-May-03/7:23 PM
"as the pyramids burn" Be smart, change this to librarys, because of the obvious, that being the impossibilty of burning stone, ever. And definitrly add more commas and fix Phoenix immediately. Because that is one of those mispells that can't slide by, ever.
regarding some deleted poem... 12-May-03/12:17 PM
It's great. if you wrote it.
regarding some deleted poem... 12-May-03/12:20 PM
Chirtelie durp dew wurp.
regarding some deleted poem... 12-May-03/3:50 PM
A friend and I overdosed on nutmeg once. It was fiercely unpleasent to say the least.
Re: Pomona with a best friend by <{Baba^Yaga}> 12-May-03/4:09 PM
When you were at the MENSA center proving your Masonic doctrine on doctrines legitimate did you play pocket pool while staring at small underdeveloped asian breasts while listening to Sigh? Because witch, I'm impressed.
regarding some deleted poem... 12-May-03/4:29 PM
Because, you are an android.


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