replying on INDECENCY by TanHand
9 Apr 2003, 11:20 AM
Yesuh ma'am I sures do. Could you please be as kind as to tell me where the Rilke books is? WHORE
on Oh holy shit by Lucifer
25 Feb 2003, 5:10 AM
2 (how bad did you want that?)
replying on He put a price on her head by Nanshe
25 Feb 2003, 4:24 AM
"Usually I have a problem with diaphanous, overused poetry word" I'm not sure how true this is, but it is indescribably sad anyway.
replying on He put a price on her head by Nanshe
25 Feb 2003, 4:23 AM
I have a diabetic sole :~(
on Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>
24 Feb 2003, 9:12 PM
IT SUCKS!! ADMIT IT!!
on Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>
24 Feb 2003, 8:55 PM
In responses to my comments, you have neglected to write anything about my comments on your poetry. Maybe when you address each feeble point I make I'll stop goading you. If this poem is such the fucking cat's pyjamas it won't take a minute.
replying on Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>
24 Feb 2003, 8:50 PM
My point here is that I believe the poem would be more effective if it didn't try to bridge the gap between male whore experience and average experience by assuming that the reader can find some common ground to relate to. I feel that this search cheapens and weakens the poem. If the reader were unable to find common ground he or she would begin to comprehend the feeling that someone who has no common ground with anyone else feels, ie what a male prostitute dying alone in an indifferent world feels. My point here is that the sense of tragedy is lessened by the unimaginative delivery. All this poem does is say that some guy is dying under unfortunate circumstances and that he's sad. Big fucking deal I say. If the sole intent here is to make the reader feel sorry for this person, it wouldn't be much of a poem, even if it did manage to do that.
It's a fine poem, it just seems that if h8 feels so strongly about this, maybe he should do something interesting instead of something not too many tiers above your garden variety whiney girl poetry. The fact that it is about a male whore dying alone doesn't really distinguish it from those my girlfriend left me type things so universally scorned.
It's a fine poem, it just seems that if h8 feels so strongly about this, maybe he should do something interesting instead of something not too many tiers above your garden variety whiney girl poetry. The fact that it is about a male whore dying alone doesn't really distinguish it from those my girlfriend left me type things so universally scorned.
replying on Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>
24 Feb 2003, 8:40 PM
GANUS IS ME/SETTLE. YOU DUMB CUNT. LET IT GO. I AGREE TO DISAGREE ON THIS ONE, AND IF IT MEANS I'M AN EGOTISTICAL IDIOTIC WANKER SO BE IT, IT IS CONSOLATION ENOUGH KNOWING I DIDN'T WRITE THIS.
replying on Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>
23 Feb 2003, 4:28 PM
Note to TanHand, that'd be a good poem.
replying on Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>
23 Feb 2003, 4:27 PM
A broken heart is better than a heart that's left alone, silly, at least according to the NewOrder song. A broken heart is like a fistfight or The Stooges - horrible but life affirming.
replying on Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>
23 Feb 2003, 4:26 PM
Add some stilton and you'll be cooking with Ganus (this comment is funny on many different levels)
replying on Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>
23 Feb 2003, 4:25 PM
RHODE ISLAND IN THE HEEEOUSE. WARRICK. APPARENTLY THEY SUCKED AND THEN GOT REALLY REALLY HOT.
replying on A prayer for my mum by Mr Pig (again)
23 Feb 2003, 3:00 PM
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA (x9)
on A prayer for my mum by Mr Pig (again)
23 Feb 2003, 2:55 PM
i wish my mother wuz dead so i could write a poeme this beautiful..9..
on heathen love by w~* ATHENA *~w
10 Jan 2003, 3:06 PM
Plagiarized.
on heathen love by w~* ATHENA *~w
9 Jan 2003, 11:41 PM
suxor my coxor
on Hector's such a drag by Bachus
9 Jan 2003, 10:32 PM
"My life consists of homework, meal preparation and recreation
(like poemranker)." (like poemranker)->(like the discus). That's a bit funnier I think.
(like poemranker)." (like poemranker)->(like the discus). That's a bit funnier I think.
on Hector's such a drag by Bachus
9 Jan 2003, 10:29 PM
I thought you were gonna replace it with something else. I'm amazed you've turned this into such a masterpiece. I especially like how you took my obnoxious "I don't care bit" and said "I don't care that Jesus was a male Hustler. I don't care".