replying on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?!
9 Jan 2003, 9:22 PM
Mondo boner lol
on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?!
9 Jan 2003, 9:21 PM
I mean fucking come on, "flitting from shadow to shadow"? The drama imagery at the ends sucks shit and the only good line in this is "rough" and the two after it don't make any sense. Just fucking start over and make it worthwhile. THINK OF THE POINT FIRST AND GO FROM THERE.
replying on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?!
9 Jan 2003, 9:19 PM
I forgot to add this word onto the end of my comment: "Death."
replying on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?!
9 Jan 2003, 9:19 PM
Mikius you've really killed off the sponteneity of this one. 0.
replying on Pro Forma by Jeremi B. Handrinos
9 Jan 2003, 8:32 PM
Damn it feels good to be talking about poetry again.
replying on Pro Forma by Jeremi B. Handrinos
9 Jan 2003, 8:31 PM
Darling please forgive me for my latest piece