| Re: a comment on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?! |
9-Jan-03/9:22 PM |
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| Re: Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?! |
9-Jan-03/9:21 PM |
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I mean fucking come on, "flitting from shadow to shadow"? The drama imagery at the ends sucks shit and the only good line in this is "rough" and the two after it don't make any sense. Just fucking start over and make it worthwhile. THINK OF THE POINT FIRST AND GO FROM THERE.
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| Re: a comment on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?! |
9-Jan-03/9:19 PM |
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I forgot to add this word onto the end of my comment: "Death."
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| Re: a comment on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?! |
9-Jan-03/9:19 PM |
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Mikius you've really killed off the sponteneity of this one. 0.
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| Re: a comment on Pro Forma by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
9-Jan-03/8:32 PM |
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Damn it feels good to be talking about poetry again.
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| Re: a comment on Pro Forma by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
9-Jan-03/8:31 PM |
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Darling please forgive me for my latest piece
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