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Pro Forma (Haiku) by Jeremi B. Handrinos A comet streaks past
shaking loose matter and spores
Our tails went with it
Up the ladder:
I Will Stay in Bed Today
Down the ladder:
Ode to spoons
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.111111
Posted: January 9, 2003 5:20 PM PST; Last modified: May 23, 2003 12:06 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.5555553 Overall Rank: 2452 Comments:
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Jeremi @ 140.186.49.195
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9-Jan-03/5:23 PM
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this is getting pretty fucking confusing now. Which one of me just did the ascii art of gay porn? PS I love you
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Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154
> Jeremi
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9-Jan-03/5:33 PM
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I do not do ascii art. Thankfully. PS I love you too
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Jeremi @ 140.186.49.195
> Jeremi
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9-Jan-03/5:48 PM
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Horus, I'm really worried, I just hit a new low and I'm not sure if I can go any lower
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<~> @ 67.84.171.238
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9-Jan-03/7:56 PM
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sure you can. you have been much, much lower, mr 'let's let bye-gones be bi-gonads'
p.s.--that's MY palanquin. and i'd appreciate it if you gave back my elephant. and my cabana boy. dammit, h, i never said you could 'borrow' miguel!
Darling please forgive me for my latest piece
Damn it feels good to be talking about poetry again.
Amen.
i would, but...well..it's just that. he's got the most amazing grip.
I'm thinking someone put elmers glue in his apricot scented lubriderm/latest issue of cat fancy magazine
about time that electrical hair took over again.
lose the punctuation, it disrupts the flow.
Read Soderstrom's new poem (Theology)----it's great!
Read my new poem ("Doug Soderstrom")----it's a WINNER!
A banboon fart across the moon
troubling the weaken world and it's core our eyes gazed upon to fear haiku haiku is nice. butyours make no sense at all. dream on poet dream on poet dream on. 302 view(s)
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