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Haiku № 34925

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by Jeremi B. Handrinos

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 Jan 2003 · Edited 23 May 2003 · 15 comments

A comet streaks past shaking loose matter and spores Our tails went with it

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15 comments

[n/a] Jeremi 9-Jan-03/5:23 PM Reply
this is getting pretty fucking confusing now. Which one of me just did the ascii art of gay porn? PS I love you
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos › Jeremi 9-Jan-03/5:33 PM Reply
I do not do ascii art. Thankfully. PS I love you too
[n/a] Jeremi › Jeremi 9-Jan-03/5:48 PM Reply
Horus, I'm really worried, I just hit a new low and I'm not sure if I can go any lower
[10] <~> › Jeremi 9-Jan-03/7:56 PM Reply
sure you can. you have been much, much lower, mr 'let's let bye-gones be bi-gonads'
[10] <~> 9-Jan-03/7:57 PM Reply
p.s.--that's MY palanquin. and i'd appreciate it if you gave back my elephant. and my cabana boy. dammit, h, i never said you could 'borrow' miguel!
[n/a] dmzoacan › <~> 9-Jan-03/8:31 PM Reply
Darling please forgive me for my latest piece
[n/a] dmzoacan › dmzoacan 9-Jan-03/8:32 PM Reply
Damn it feels good to be talking about poetry again.
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos › dmzoacan 10-Jan-03/12:35 AM Reply
Amen.
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos › <~> 10-Jan-03/12:34 AM Reply
i would, but...well..it's just that. he's got the most amazing grip.
[n/a] TmaraZ112 › Jeremi B. Handrinos 10-Jan-03/10:06 AM Reply
I'm thinking someone put elmers glue in his apricot scented lubriderm/latest issue of cat fancy magazine
[9] w~* ATHENA *~w 9-Jan-03/11:31 PM Reply
about time that electrical hair took over again.
[5] Robert K Foster 23-May-03/11:00 AM Reply
lose the punctuation, it disrupts the flow.
[n/a] dougsoderstrom 23-May-03/1:09 PM Reply
Read Soderstrom's new poem (Theology)----it's great!
[n/a] wCUNTw › dougsoderstrom 24-May-03/8:07 AM Reply
Read my new poem ("Doug Soderstrom")----it's a WINNER!
[0] IcHronit 4-Nov-04/2:30 PM Reply
A banboon fart across the moon
troubling the weaken world and it's core
our eyes gazed upon to fear

haiku haiku is nice. butyours make no sense at all. dream on poet dream on poet dream on.