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Pro Forma (Haiku) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
A comet streaks past shaking loose matter and spores Our tails went with it

Down the ladder: Ode to spoons

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.111111
Weighted score: 5.5555553
Overall Rank: 2419
Posted: January 9, 2003 5:20 PM PST; Last modified: May 23, 2003 12:06 PM PDT
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[n/a] Jeremi @ 140.186.49.195 | 9-Jan-03/5:23 PM | Reply
this is getting pretty fucking confusing now. Which one of me just did the ascii art of gay porn? PS I love you
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 > Jeremi | 9-Jan-03/5:33 PM | Reply
I do not do ascii art. Thankfully. PS I love you too
[n/a] Jeremi @ 140.186.49.195 > Jeremi | 9-Jan-03/5:48 PM | Reply
Horus, I'm really worried, I just hit a new low and I'm not sure if I can go any lower
[10] <~> @ 67.84.171.238 > Jeremi | 9-Jan-03/7:56 PM | Reply
sure you can. you have been much, much lower, mr 'let's let bye-gones be bi-gonads'
[10] <~> @ 67.84.171.238 | 9-Jan-03/7:57 PM | Reply
p.s.--that's MY palanquin. and i'd appreciate it if you gave back my elephant. and my cabana boy. dammit, h, i never said you could 'borrow' miguel!
[n/a] dmzoacan @ 140.186.47.37 > <~> | 9-Jan-03/8:31 PM | Reply
Darling please forgive me for my latest piece
[n/a] dmzoacan @ 140.186.47.37 > dmzoacan | 9-Jan-03/8:32 PM | Reply
Damn it feels good to be talking about poetry again.
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 > dmzoacan | 10-Jan-03/12:35 AM | Reply
Amen.
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 > <~> | 10-Jan-03/12:34 AM | Reply
i would, but...well..it's just that. he's got the most amazing grip.
[n/a] TmaraZ112 @ 140.186.47.37 > Jeremi B. Handrinos | 10-Jan-03/10:06 AM | Reply
I'm thinking someone put elmers glue in his apricot scented lubriderm/latest issue of cat fancy magazine
[9] w~* ATHENA *~w @ 205.188.209.107 | 9-Jan-03/11:31 PM | Reply
about time that electrical hair took over again.
[5] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.66.6 | 23-May-03/11:00 AM | Reply
lose the punctuation, it disrupts the flow.
[n/a] dougsoderstrom @ 207.80.112.1 | 23-May-03/1:09 PM | Reply
Read Soderstrom's new poem (Theology)----it's great!
[n/a] wCUNTw @ 195.157.153.253 > dougsoderstrom | 24-May-03/8:07 AM | Reply
Read my new poem ("Doug Soderstrom")----it's a WINNER!
[0] IcHronit @ 168.28.203.194 | 4-Nov-04/2:30 PM | Reply
A banboon fart across the moon
troubling the weaken world and it's core
our eyes gazed upon to fear

haiku haiku is nice. butyours make no sense at all. dream on poet dream on poet dream on.
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