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Pro Forma (Haiku) by Jeremi B. Handrinos

A comet streaks past shaking loose matter and spores Our tails went with it

IcHronit 4-Nov-04/2:30 PM
A banboon fart across the moon
troubling the weaken world and it's core
our eyes gazed upon to fear

haiku haiku is nice. butyours make no sense at all. dream on poet dream on poet dream on.




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