on some deleted poem
9 Jul 2002, 7:17 PM
Very percise it touches me in a sense of within my reality of the mind beneath my deep thought's very good...
on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
9 Jul 2002, 7:24 PM
not enough effort or though went into this...
Hi dark_angel has ranked my poems and i have had my poems published in books and i have won an award for my poetry i am only 14 but i do kno a good poem when i see one and i must say i agree with dark_angel this is a old fashion poem it needs more life some parts are boring but you will do better poet's allways have there flukes...
on Fighting Peacefully. by LucidRevelation
9 Jul 2002, 7:37 PM
very good alot of thought went into this i can tell that this poem is based on true life am i wrong?
on Fun by paracetamol
9 Jul 2002, 7:39 PM
stupid sex,blo jobs,and drugs in a little haikue try somthing other then those three things to write about ok...
on Ode to a Red Trashcan by nentwined
9 Jul 2002, 12:37 AM
Hi angel_of_fait here yes very good job loss of words i guess and would you please rate my poetry thank's...
on Ode to a Red Trashcan by nentwined
9 Jul 2002, 12:38 AM
Hi angel_of_fait here yes very good job i have loss of words i guess and would you please rate my poetry thank's...
on some deleted poem
9 Jul 2002, 12:40 AM
not to much heart our though went into this one i guess maybe your next oje will bne better..angel_of_fait.......
on endless eternity: by Sapphire
9 Jul 2002, 12:42 AM
hhhmmmmm needs more though i think and it is really good buttwo parts crash together and well that is just my opinnion..
on some deleted poem
9 Jul 2002, 12:45 AM
uh ok no sence at all just a though not a poem i think you should of put alot more thought then that but good try from angel_of_fait
on Their Eyes by venusdemilo
9 Jul 2002, 12:48 AM
pretty good you headed in a good direction but ended up short angel_of_fait