Re: Green by tiamat	9-Jul-02/7:44 PM
Very good makes u think you must like the color green or just feel this way...
Re: Fun by paracetamol	9-Jul-02/7:39 PM
stupid sex,blo jobs,and drugs in a little haikue try somthing other then those three things to write about ok...
Re: Fighting Peacefully. by LucidRevelation	9-Jul-02/7:37 PM
very good alot of thought went into this i can tell that this poem is based on true life am i wrong?
Re: Icon by timfowler	9-Jul-02/7:35 PM
Hi dark_angel has ranked my poems and i have had my poems published in books and i have won an award for my poetry i am only 14 but i do kno a good poem when i see one and i must say i agree with dark_angel this is a old fashion poem it needs more life some parts are boring but you will do better poet's allways have there flukes...
Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	9-Jul-02/7:24 PM
not enough effort or though went into this...
Re: Birth by nentwined	9-Jul-02/7:19 PM
hhmmmm i do not kno but it sold me short this haiku will be a ponder in my thoughts
Re: Their Eyes by venusdemilo	9-Jul-02/12:48 AM
pretty good you headed in a good direction but ended up short angel_of_fait
Re: Sick by timfowler	9-Jul-02/12:46 AM
Very Very good i loved it angel_of_fait......
Re: endless eternity: by Sapphire	9-Jul-02/12:42 AM
hhhmmmmm needs more though i think and it is really good buttwo parts crash together and well that is just my opinnion..
Re: Ode to a Red Trashcan by nentwined	9-Jul-02/12:38 AM
Hi angel_of_fait here yes very good job i have loss of words i guess and would you please rate my poetry thank's...
Re: Ode to a Red Trashcan by nentwined	9-Jul-02/12:37 AM
Hi angel_of_fait here yes very good job loss of words i guess and would you please rate my poetry thank's...