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Sick (Free verse) by timfowler
There's a path I walk,
a disused line, with fences
either side it turns slowly,
then runs straight and enclosed
through fields, past houses
made remote by intervening wire.
A year ago, just here,
where the dead bridge crosses,
I stood and cried, and heard
in the streaming rain
the clock's slow sobs
of seconds, disposed
like skin, slipping.
It rained as much today,
tried hard to snow, and
I walked the path again,
under the bridge, to the place
where you can watch the trains,
feel the vibration in your sodden shoes
of a heavy line, meant for steel
or stone, but empty, empty, empty
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Posted: May 20, 2002 2:16 AM PDT; Last modified: May 20, 2002 2:16 AM PDT
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