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20 most recent comments by horus8 (2801-2820) and replies

Re: Walls by razorgrin 31-Jul-02/4:37 PM
if you could imagine..tell me .what is it that d.a. does for real (money,greenbacks,shilaylees). i think he's like a brilliant seven year old hooked up to tubes and dolphins and shit huh..don't you think ps do you have the micro squeeler? i need to attack my neighbors kangaroo. its playing tail fling the poo. l
Re: Walls by razorgrin 31-Jul-02/4:02 PM
this would make a phenominal first paragraph in a novella or short story. do you write short stories? you should.maybe lay.for.three.weeks.vulture.luckystrike.exhale
Re: God's Rod (toilet drink poem) by horus8 31-Jul-02/3:56 PM
Ahh..how was work? tongue whip anyone today. hope so. glad you approved. maybe. do you have anything of yours tou could recommend interesting and gargabell. i need some taekwondo eye majik.jerky.troop.fila.ovariantube.greaser
Re: Invisible too by horus8 31-Jul-02/3:07 PM
The plains of africa part 3) the lioness crouches and crawls closer to the sound. young gazelle nursing, suckling hears not the silent cat, and feeds on. pounce.tit-rip.blood.mother startled bounds awaying not looking back.will have another one. when the rain comes. off to her right she sees a pride of lions eating a dead rhino with shit on his heel. love comes seasonal but leaves flash flood!u
Re: Invisible too by horus8 31-Jul-02/2:45 PM
i am totally not on the 'hoof' i'm in the hammock with lap top bee-bop smoking and swinging..it's a precious afternoon and worth the flashbacks.californiahealsslow.but healsnone the less..the 'hoof'is just abeak180degr.. it also makes a fine foot darwinistictually speaking about every 10 million years ah...wasp..fuck'
Re: What R U? by kawakurdi 31-Jul-02/2:36 PM
Call it River Phoenix i really liked this..it flares incredibly at the end starts of slow and simple then gets really smart and lucid.i trembled and felt wet.under.brow.reason.aware.i
Re: Porn by New Life Drug 31-Jul-02/2:30 PM
i truly hate when that happens. you know? cable bill comes in too high! my sexy valentine and stuff printed right there in bold print for everyone to see! fuckh
Re: Invisible too by horus8 31-Jul-02/2:26 PM
i don't know am i. i thought i was just mumbling like brad in snatch. hold on my hoof is itching for the store.clive barker.hammock.backyard.cigarettep
Re: Invisible too by horus8 31-Jul-02/2:22 PM
listen..kawakurdi..i am moved..but it's only a matter of time before 6dark6angel6 gets back from his lunch of fritos and snaps to carpet bomb this mother fucking, mother hugging vomit with an onslaught of trident missiles and screaming eagles with trumpets and gabriel and druel and osama and bombs and kittens and hemp lubricants..its only a matter of time. but i still feel slightly vaguely touched. you can hear on mp3 at gangbox.com..it has whales and techno drums it rubs me raw i hope you hate it. fuck shit.fuck i have to go to the store.smoke breal then re-edit phone tapclaptruelies.later
Re: Invisible too by horus8 31-Jul-02/2:13 PM
actually in all good faith..not that i have faith..just saying. i never even noticed that until you just brought it up..intersting. a closer inspection could reveal the triscuit picnic. we'll see. magnify.lilac.tempest.snowman saves the day!a
Re: Tijuana jail song by horus8 31-Jul-02/2:09 PM
A taco becomes onions of metaphorical symbols flash card flipping past the eye...i'm stuck in jail with yellow fever and pancho villa is staring at my gringo 'hoof' fly----------is down------now is up! tequilla= big fat spic+my arse.some cash on hand..plea.....no...juan..plea..ouc.h.!!!!
Re: Invisible too by horus8 31-Jul-02/2:00 PM
I am dead watching my mother visit the grave when she knows that know one will see her their. maybe there was some things left unmentioned..it's about the perfect hazy grey day and revenge through silence
Re: Letter to the Horsehead Nebula by Tangerines 31-Jul-02/1:40 PM
try plowing a field in the middle of minnesota and fishing for walleye (the elusive one) also both microcosmic-psuedo-orgasmic...the big let down.@
Re: Ode to a Red Trashcan by nentwined 31-Jul-02/1:01 PM
the plains of africa part2)
the rhino squats low in the shade of the cypress..the lion pride stares and licks lips. rhino falls asleep with shit on heel. fly on horn tip.tail whips slow.
Re: Ode to a Red Trashcan by nentwined 31-Jul-02/1:00 PM
the plains of africa part2)
the rhino squats low in the shade of the cypress..the lion pride stares and licks lips. rhino falls asleep with shit on heel. fly on horn tip.tail whips slow.
Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 31-Jul-02/12:55 PM
when you are naked.do you see your feet? or do you never know how your pee comes to be on the seat?
Re: Daily Rutein by New Life Drug 31-Jul-02/12:47 PM
Thrivet on..sleep is for weak beaks. the "hoof" predicts rain. the raven only lunchg
Re: Prophecy by New Life Drug 31-Jul-02/12:40 PM
all right god damnit..if you are 13 then i am jesus surfing the horns of the hale-bop comet..i am dracula selling his fangs to the japanese. i am frankenstein teaching kindergaten in the valley. you write well for a grommy..we'll have to read morew
Re: UNTITLED by New Life Drug 31-Jul-02/12:35 PM
i don't remember writing this salaciously when i was an 8th grader...rest assured..this is border line brilliant...write on acolyte.virgin.bomb.vanerial.spankings.Y
Re: Jesus was a necromancer by horus8 31-Jul-02/12:24 PM
gracias. as soon as i clean all of the glass tables in my house i'll go read your stuff..compulsive.hoof.tender.billy.goat.yeti.


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