Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

20 most recent comments by horus8 (2421-2440) and replies

Re: a comment on more{Porn*Star}{Hai*kus} by horus8 15-Oct-02/3:25 PM
i take it you didn't read hit and run yet, little too much melot that night. i accordianed a honda with my truck at about 4 in the morning.i had a wave of merlot soak my entire dash board. lol!
Re: d e e p e r by daniella 15-Oct-02/1:29 PM
this is concrete and WINS THE HORUS 8 GOLDEN Q-TIP AWARD ON THIS FINE DAY. loved it! have a fine navy day.9.
Re: forgetfulness by daniella 15-Oct-02/1:20 PM
"towards the unending", should be the ending. 9. p.s. never ever rent the panic room. it is by far the worst scripted and edited movie i have ever scene. no wonder i haven't seen jared leto milling about lately he's in hiding three doors down. ha lol! poor bastard. let's kill david fincher.
Re: anyhow by daniella 15-Oct-02/1:13 PM
lets submerge. sign language underwater. 8.
Re: here now today by daniella 15-Oct-02/1:09 PM
most can't. you're have way there. don't stop now.
Re: haiku's i love but i cannot do them well enough by UAFANTHORPEY 15-Oct-02/1:01 PM
well that's two out of ten, can you find the other 8 missing things that you don't have. i can.
Re: Bowed by <~> 15-Oct-02/12:56 PM
i'm with him! but i'd rather be with you. hee hee. my hoof is blushing.
Re: I am Cuba by cacophony 15-Oct-02/12:34 PM
change clock to cock and cuba to Bali. then duck! boom! 1.
Re: a comment on more{Porn*Star}{Hai*kus} by horus8 15-Oct-02/12:21 PM
darling, i resemble that statement. get me a martini! missing you. nice rack, by the way. luv.h.
Re: a comment on Recess by horus8 15-Oct-02/12:18 PM
well, take a listen for yourself at gangbox.com under mp3's.
you may here beverly d'angelo talking about apples, helicopters, machine guns and children laughing...at teeter totter playground. actually we mixed the song right after columbine for jason bentley at kcrw in los angeles. needless to say. he was a bit put off by it.ironically now years later..it's getting much better reviews for being original and ahead of its time.
Re: a comment on Recess by horus8 14-Oct-02/12:01 PM
figures. maybe? a 'splendid' missing face, perhaps purchased at lord avery's garage sale along with the waffle iron and the clenched buttocks of greystoke.
Re: a comment on Recess by horus8 13-Oct-02/7:04 PM
i don't say it "{every fucking line) there are 39 lines and out of those 39, 9 lines have teeter totter playgroud. and it's a fucking song and that happens to be the return phrase you ball busting recluse. don't you have a turd or a puddle of pee or a missing face to study somewhere?
Re: Haiku for Mum by waltfreakinwhitman 12-Oct-02/3:52 PM
YES! HORUS8 GOLDEN Q-TIP AWARD ON THIS FINE DAY why because oedipus means swollen foot.. because when 'they' found him as a baby he was hanging by his foot. congradulations are in order. 10!
Re: a comment on Recess by horus8 12-Oct-02/1:17 PM
well. lovely, the recorded version on gangbox.com under mp3's is quite the super produced spectical..complete with green and red apples, and helicopters too if i'm not mistaken. thanks.g
Re: a comment on Irony by w~* ATHENA *~w 12-Oct-02/1:06 PM
he's your father. and he control volcanoes w/ his mind. get clear. perhaps you should read more.
Re: The crow bird by UAFANTHORPEY 10-Oct-02/2:45 PM
wow..this starts strong then rapidly falls appart. simply because crows don't listen very well. because they are birds. with small brains. bird brainse
Re: Safe Distance, 10-10-02 by Frass 10-Oct-02/1:18 PM
the sad thing is deep down he wants to be. caught, that is
and spanked with his mothers 11 inck black dildo. 8.
Re: The Fragrance by mozac 10-Oct-02/1:02 PM
fun dip candy packets w/two vanilla sticks. cure all.
Re: Sisters of mercy by strider1 10-Oct-02/1:00 PM
great piece. hats off, but the titles gotta go, because of the leonard cohen song relation. perhaps 'brimstone the rabbits foot' or gravedigging for mangos? the pocketed banana. 'taming the lap snorkel' ah fuck it. good work 8.
Re: Sisters of mercy by strider1 10-Oct-02/12:57 PM
great piece. hats off, but the titles gotta go, because of the leonard cohen song relation. perhaps 'brimstone the rabbits foot' or gravedigging for mangos? the pocketed banana. 'taming the lap snorkel' ah fuck it. good work 8.


Next 20 Top Previous 20




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2025 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001